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Red Dust

Mar 18, 2007 00:26

Title: Red Dust

Author: puckkit

Rating: R

Pairing: Mohinder/Sylar

Disclaimer: I do not own any of these characters or the show Heroes, therefore all of this is false and made up from my charmingly eccentric imagination.

Author's Notes:This was supposed to be something else. Completely. And then it morphed into something I don't even understand. I am ( Read more... )

sylar, heroes, mohinder

Comments 20

sesemperamabo March 18 2007, 04:08:20 UTC

*shudders* Absolutely beautiful. There are no other words.

puckkit March 18 2007, 13:19:12 UTC

Thank you! :)

lunais_cross March 18 2007, 04:31:49 UTC

I always find your stories when it's late at night and I'm not coherent enough to give you a decent review, or at least one not consisting of "Eep!" or *hand flailing*. Seriously.

Wow. This fic kills me dead from its prettiness.

"...he hasn’t freed that power yet..."

I love how that little bit about the precognitive ability was phrased.

puckkit March 18 2007, 13:20:57 UTC

You must be in a similar time-zone to me then, because I post them very late at night ^^ My apologies! Although I do enjoy both "Eep!" and *hand flailing* heh.

Thank you! I read an amazing fic a while back that focused entirely around the idea of Sylar liberating the powers from their human hosts and it's stuck with me. So good.

lovemyfaceoff March 18 2007, 04:57:16 UTC

Oh, this was just beautiful.

puckkit March 18 2007, 13:21:19 UTC

Thank you :)

butterflyweb March 18 2007, 05:23:25 UTC

Damn.

I love the details you weave throughout this, the unusual placement of common things, like the "heat under his tongue" or "feel[ing] the desert in his bones". The first section is absolutely wonderful.

It's such a beautiful, twisted kind of crazy, and you write it so well. The repetition of the word "hate" and the hysterical laughter...it just crawled under my skin it was so good.

Absolutely amazing.

puckkit March 18 2007, 13:22:44 UTC

Aw thank you!

I was so ready to do a different kind of story- I had a plot and everything! And suddenly I was writing and it just morphed out of my control. Hence the insanity that ended up appearing.

But I'm definitely glad you enjoyed it!

tessykins March 18 2007, 06:56:26 UTC

Whoa. This rocks. Excellent Sylar POV. I loved the dreams framing the main body of the story. Great work.

puckkit March 18 2007, 13:23:13 UTC

Icon! Hee!

Thank you! I love his POV, you just can't go wrong with it.

tessykins March 18 2007, 21:44:57 UTC

Thank you!

Sylar's fun to write. You can just let yourself go crazy, literally. :)