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Waltzing With The Open Sea

Feb 10, 2011 09:06

Title: Waltzing With The Open Sea

Author: puckkit

Rating: PG13 [language]

Pairing/Character: hints of Steve/Danny

Disclaimer: I do not own these characters or Hawaii 5-0 (in any of its incarnations), therefore all of this is false and made up from my charmingly eccentric imagination.

Author's Notes: No warnings for any episodes. Title is from a song ( Read more... )

danny, steve, hawaii 5-0

Comments 63

bellalaine February 10 2011, 19:14:48 UTC

The ending...oh my heart.

puckkit February 11 2011, 21:32:50 UTC

:) Thank you so much!

raynedanser February 10 2011, 19:19:08 UTC

Oh my heart. Absolutely love love love this and how Danny knows what Steve needs without him saying so so so much!

puckkit February 11 2011, 21:33:18 UTC

Exactly what I was going for- he's a perceptive guy, Danny is, more than he gets credit for I think. Thank you for commenting!

galadriel34 February 10 2011, 19:48:16 UTC

Beautiful, little bit sad but I just love it.

puckkit February 11 2011, 21:34:07 UTC

Thank you! :)

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puckkit February 11 2011, 21:34:31 UTC

Thank you so much! I think I got lucky with the last line, endings are hard!

jesseofthenorth February 10 2011, 20:58:35 UTC

The loneliness in this is palpable .Very nicely done, great pacing.

puckkit February 11 2011, 21:34:54 UTC

Just what I was going for, thank you!