A Lesson In Breathing

[puckkit]

I have the headache to end all headaches right now. If this isn't complete crap, a miracle will have occurred. Screw you, vodka and water.

Title: A Lesson In Breathing

Author: puckkit

Rating: R (for disturbing imagery)

Pairing/Character: Mohinder/Sylar

Disclaimer: I do not own these characters or the show Heroes, therefore all of this is false and

Comments

[trinaweena]

this was wonderful, fantastic job!

[puckkit]

Thank you muchly!

[poemwithnorhyme]

Jesus Christ, that was somehow so hot and interesting. I want to know so much more, I am very, very intrigued. Are you going to be writing a sequel by any chance? Either way, this was just beautiful. Every word had me captivated, and I love the idea behind this. Fantastic! ^_^

[puckkit]

I see a few questions about a sequel and I have to say that I'm not sure. There were a few things that I'd have to elaborate upon that I'm not sure people picked up on, and I'm not sure I'd like to bring out in the open. But we'll see!

I appreciate the feedback! Thank you so much!

[feyuca]

What exactly was the girl's abilities? Who is the one hurt? Sylar?

Oooh. She gave Sylar's powers to Mohinder? :D AWESOME.

Will you be continuing? This is really interesting. :)

[puckkit]

Hee, so many questions!

The girl could give powers to others, so she basically gave all Sylar's powers to Mohinder. And yeah, Sylar was the one the POV focused on.

Thank you! I'm not sure. I'm on the fence about it, but we'll see!

[levitatethis]

I really dig this. It's actually a fascinating read...so the girl transferred Sylar's powers to Mohinder? I love the idea of a helpless Sylar needing Mohinder to get himself together so he can save them both. It's such an interesting twist of events. I can feel his frustration paired with Mohinder's freaking out. Great job!

[levitatethis]

Quickly adding...

Great song (by Dragonette) quoted at the side. I'm actually using one of the verses in a fic I'm planning to post in the next few weeks on mylar_fic.

[puckkit]

Dragonette is fantastic! I've loved them for a while now, but Take It Like A Man is definitely my favourite. It would work wicked in a story with Mohinder and Sylar :)

[puckkit]

There's something so fascinating about the power play between Mohinder and Sylar and nothing is more fun than playing around with it ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[aheartfulofyou]

Oh, squee, it's for me! :D I was very delighted/confused for a second, but then just delighted.

LOVELY. Also, yay for writing it!

[puckkit]

I'm so sorry with how late it is! I swear I'm going to get through all your prompts :) I think I'm almost done them... even if it takes me ages (which, apparently, will be the case ^^)

Thank you for reading it!