Synchronicity

[puckkit]

Title: Synchronicity

Author: puckkit

Rating: G (I disgust myself)

Pairing/Character: Mohinder/Sylar

Disclaimer: I do not own these characters or the show Heroes, therefore all of this is false and made up from my charmingly eccentric imagination.

Author's Notes: For the mylar_fic ficathon where I was writing with the prompt Like An Open Book and for aheartfulofyou. Fluffy

Comments

[aiisling]

"Mohinder is an open book in a dead language." This line was especially poignant, and immediately caught my eye.

"Mohinder’s body doesn’t speak of love or devotion; it speaks of hard choices and a fight for faith. But it speaks." Beautiful! Simply beautiful. I also very much enjoyed the "in this space" paragraph.

The imagery here was absolutely breathtaking. I felt like I was floating in a dream world (and your journal style helped the illusion). Cheers for the best Mylar fluff I've read in a long time.

[puckkit]

Thank you so much! I'm glad it worked because it's so hard to tell if what works for you when you're writing it will work for other people.

Thank you! :)

[prelusion]

Wow. Amazing.
You write so beautifully. I'm so jealous!

[puckkit]

Thank you!
Aww thanks, I really appreciate it :)

[violet_anchovy]

On the one hand, there's nothing--apart from my attachment to the ship and willingness to believe--that makes it particularly _Mylar_.

But I do believe, and this was so beautiful I could feel it.

Guh.

[puckkit]

Damn. I was sort of hoping people wouldn't pick up on that too much. See, that was my big problem. Mylar fluff just... shouldn't really exist, y'know? The pairing doesn't lend itself to sweet love. Still, it's interesting to try, I suppose.

And I really appreciate the fact that you suspended belief for a little bit with me in order to enjoy this :)

Thank you.

[aheartfulofyou]

Oh, don't be disgusted with yourself! I mean, I would be, too, with a G rating, but still. :D This is so pretty. Beautifully written. And... *shudders*... fluffy. Which is what was requested, what with this ficathon. *Shakes finger at fluff*. But beautiful. So, yay, thank you, good job! :)

[puckkit]

*Giggles* You're so evil. Silly 'G'.

Thank you! Pretty and fluffy and cute as a bunny, I'm afraid. :( *growls at fluff* Thank everything that we can move on to smut and death and all that fun jazz ^^

Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed :)

[ivy_b]

I loved it. It was so beautiful and poetic and the descriptions so original. Lovely.

[puckkit]

Thank you very much!