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A Ring Around 3/?

Jun 23, 2007 19:57

Title: A Ring Around 3/?

Author: puckkit

Rating: PG-13

Pairing/Character: Mohinder/Sylar

Disclaimer: I do not own these characters or the show Heroes, therefore all of this is false and made up from my charmingly eccentric imagination.

Author's Notes: Usual warnings- spoilers for first season, AU. Much thanks, as always, to mneiai because she's been ( Read more... )

a ring around, sylar, heroes, mohinder

Comments 11

aunt_zelda June 23 2007, 23:36:18 UTC

*whorships the ground you walk on*
LOVED this.
Ooooh, Sylar struck a NERVE. Ouch ...
Oh great, now SYLAR'S back in control (sort of) dear god ... *runs in fear for Mohinder, then realizes that Mohinder was creeping me out a while ago and resues a normal pace*

puckkit June 24 2007, 15:00:20 UTC

Hee ^___^
Sylar's like that. He's vicious in mental activities.
I feel that they could be so well-matched, creepiness-wise. A back and forth of creepy, if you will.

Thank you!

kael_raye June 23 2007, 23:46:59 UTC

Ooo...Sylar got him good! XD

Hee!!! I really can't wait to see what Sylar's going to do...And Mohinder's still creepy (though he seems to have more of a human side now).

^_^

puckkit June 24 2007, 15:01:37 UTC

Damn straight!

Sylar is a right creeper, and Mohinder... well, he's getting there. It's hard to compete with Sylar ^^

Thanks for reading!

acaciaonnastik June 24 2007, 00:41:05 UTC

...awesome. You know, this chapter here made the whole fic, for me, into something that could totally be canon. Because it's just a more extreme version of Parasite- Mohinder can convince himself to disregard a lot of morals in this particular cause, but he'll never really be able to take Sylar on those terms. He's had a lot more experience of being evil, after all...

puckkit June 24 2007, 15:03:08 UTC

I love Mohinder for Parasite because it made me see him like I never thought he was. The fact that he actually shot that gun at him, that he was willing to kill him... I love that. Although it may get a little less canon as I go, I'll admit.

Hee. True enough. Sylar has so much more experience being evil.

mneiai June 24 2007, 00:41:56 UTC

This is coming together so wonderfully! I love how the little pieces I get to see weave into such a beautiful fic. And you did really well on the dialogue in this part. I love regaining-the-upper-hand!Sylar haha

puckkit June 24 2007, 15:03:57 UTC

Thank you! I can't wait to do more (now we just have to nervously await the vs2 unveiling! Ah!)

Me too! I want to have some real back and forth now. I'm stoked.

steamedmirror June 24 2007, 00:49:51 UTC

Oh, no. Mo, what did you do? I gotta say, as much as Mohinder was freaking me out in the previous chapters, the thought of Sylar playing mind games is more terrifying to me. I guess that's why he's the serial killer and not Mo -- not that the latter can't give said serial killer a run for his money.

puckkit June 24 2007, 15:05:02 UTC

Oh you'll see *evil laugh*

I agree completely. But... well, you'll see Mohinder a little different coming up. It's... I won't spoil it. But the playing field levels itself a little, let's just say ^^