A Ring Around

[puckkit]

Title: A Ring Around

Author: puckkit

Rating: PG

Pairing/Character: Mohinder/Sylar

Disclaimer: I do not own these characters or the show Heroes, therefore all of this is false and made up from my charmingly eccentric imagination.

Author's Notes: I feel there's some fun to be had with dark!Mohinder! Thanks to mneiai for the awesome plot help. This is an AU

Comments

[mneiai]

"You’re broken now"

OMG, so good. I love you so much! I could almost forgive you for cheating on me earlier!

This is a great start to what will hopefully be an amazing fic. Sylar in this was so tragic, especially with the way Mohinder played it up--with the clock, with talking about how now Sylar is no better than all the broken, worthless people he's ridiculed and killed.

I definitely think this is post-able. You might get some people complaining about Mohinder being out of character, but those are just people who can't appreciate dark!Mohinder ^.^

[puckkit]

Hurrah! Thank you!

But... but I said I'd never do it again... *shifty eyes*

I'm really excited about it. It's very rare I ever have a plot in mind when I start things. Which, again, I can't thank you enough for that. Where would I be if I couldn't steal your plots? ^^

Awesome. I'm so down ^___^ (also, icon! Is that new? *is suspicious*)

[mneiai]

You better never do it again! All these beatific plots can disappear, y'know!

Though, then again, I am kind of stealing that crackfic idea off of you, if I ever manage to get anything done with my 5YG fic.

...Nooooooo, I don't know what you're talking about. New Sylar icon? Of course not! ::cough::

[puckkit]

NoooOOooOOoOoooo :(

I want to see that crackfic so bad! And the 5YG. So you best be gettin' to the writin'. That's all I have to say.

Uh... huh. I believe that. I also believe in the reincarnation of Princess Diana as a peanut butter cookie.

[clarkangel]

Wowzer! This was so freaking good. Your Mohinder totally creeped me out, in a good way. I felt his coldness, and his reason for it. Awesome!

[puckkit]

Hee! I like that you said 'wowzer' ^^

Thank you! I'm excited to do more with him being so cold and dark.

[ebonyguitarchic]

wow.....chills. AWESOME!

[puckkit]

Fantastic! Thank you :)

[whatwas]

I loved dark Mohinder in Parasite, so this is definitely awesome.
can't wait to see where you go with this!
:D

[puckkit]

Me too! It was one of my favourite Mohinder episodes.
Thank you! I hope it doesn't disappoint!
^^

[kael_raye]

Woah! This is just so...creepy and good...Mohinder is freaky!!!

Wow! You wrote this so well too...*shiver*

[puckkit]

Mohinder is freaky (tries not to think of strange song references...)

Thank you! I appreciate it ^^