To Find Fault

[puckkit]

Title: To Find Fault

Author: puckkit

Rating: G

Pairing/Character: Peter/Claire (kinda future)

Disclaimer: I do not own these characters or the show Heroes, therefore all of this is false and made up from my charmingly eccentric imagination.

Author's Notes: I can't help but be drawn to angsty pairings, although I don't usually stray from my slashy

Comments

[loveotter]

Very nice. I like angst as well and this certainly delivers, and it's a good study of their relationship, and a realistic portrayal to boot--being aware of the intrinsic problems yet being together anyway, because the alternative is just not an option. *thumbs up*

[puckkit]

I'm huge on the angst, not gonna lie. Thank you! I was going for realistic, the sorts of things one might face were one in that kind of relationship. I appreciate the feedback!

[tardisinthesgc]

yeah. I love it. so sweet and angsty.

[puckkit]

Thank you! I am very glad you liked it ^^

[madcowre]

Yeah the angsty-ness is great aswell as being such a cute fic lol ;)

[puckkit]

Angst is my first love, but cuteness is a close second ^^ Thanks so much!

[michelsita]

On those days she’ll hold him if he accepts her and leave him alone if he doesn’t.

There is something painfully bitter about loving him.

And something intrinsically cruel about the fact that she can’t stop.

This was good, in special the idea that "them" was unstoppable in someway, they met and they were doomed to love each other. Star crossed lovers, loving him will be painful but not as much as not loving him.

[puckkit]

For sure. I definitely wrote it with the thought that there was no other option in mind, it is what it is and they just have to deal with that. Thank you so much for the feedback ^^

[hgpotter]

Aw. Good one.

[puckkit]

Thank you! :)