i am a small man, on a see-saw. but i do my best, you know? i like to go with the flow, but recently ive started taking action. ive felt the negatives of being proactive more than the positives, so far.
It's a real hum-dinger if you put effort in and not much seems to come of it. The temptation is to give up, but you really shouldn't. Push on through the muck, to the tender nougat center of the success candy bar.
I got your e-mail and it's fucking ace, I'm putting together a list of ideas (I have a bunch) that I'll send to you tomorrow when I get the opportunity. I really fucking like it, man. The beanies are a great touch.
thanks man. speaking of tender centres, your compliment makes me feel like a microwaved mars bar inside.
but there will be majorly significant changes. mostly all the scenes between shane and jesse will go/be absorbed into other scenes. you think the comedic touches work? cos it starts out all straight-faced and shit...
and the message? too ham-fisted? are the voiceovers and parst where she talks to shane too blunt?
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I got your e-mail and it's fucking ace, I'm putting together a list of ideas (I have a bunch) that I'll send to you tomorrow when I get the opportunity. I really fucking like it, man. The beanies are a great touch.
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but there will be majorly significant changes. mostly all the scenes between shane and jesse will go/be absorbed into other scenes. you think the comedic touches work? cos it starts out all straight-faced and shit...
and the message? too ham-fisted? are the voiceovers and parst where she talks to shane too blunt?
I demand answers!
(so excited to collaborate man, for real)
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