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Fanfiction > Avatar > One-Shot > "Life Debt"

Oct 01, 2005 19:53

Title: Life Debt
Author: kissing_off
Word Count: 413
Warning: none
Rating: K

One of the many instances in which Zuko is forced, against his will better judgement, to join the Avatar. Incomplete-ish.

( In which Zuko considers the material aspect of the journey… )

fanfic, avatar, open ended, incomplete

Comments 1

fsafhjahlkjh anonymous July 5 2007, 15:09:26 UTC

LMFAO. Oh man. That was awesome. The first line made me crack up. It seems like it would be just his reaction--well, yeah, I'm going to join the avatar, but I don't have to like it. And this other line was hilarious:

And when he found his uncle, the man was engaged in a Pai Gow game with the Avatar, the waterbrats were watching patiently although Zuko could tell the male was bored out of his mind.

XD I like how he refers to them as almost objects---the male, the waterbrats? Like they're so below him they're not humans. And the last line too. LMFAO. There's no way I'm riding that thing. Very in-character.