Back to Action, by shoujokakumei, Shane/Dustin

Dec 13, 2007 02:55

Title: Back to Action (On The Home Front ( Read more... )

shoujokakumei, shane/dustin, peace

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cmar_wingnut December 13 2007, 12:41:49 UTC
Sweet! Nice to see home life and 'retirement' for Shane and Dustin contrasted with Tori being called back, and a very amusing glimpse at the characters. Ha ha, I totally envisioned Tori playing the Banana Phone Song in Dustin's ear.

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shoujokakumei December 24 2007, 00:00:36 UTC
Hee! Absolutely awesome. I couldn't think of something suitably annoying, so I figured whoever reads it could draw their own conclusion as to exactly what she was playing. xD

BTW, thanks again for this icon. :D (And sorry it took me so damn long to respond to these comments...)

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cmar_wingnut December 26 2007, 00:59:04 UTC
You're very welcome for the icon, and no problem.

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welleg_fic December 13 2007, 14:22:34 UTC
Great story. I love those two boys together.

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starandrea December 13 2007, 14:58:03 UTC
Wow. o.O That's beautiful. You are amazing! And also humorous, which is a fantastic combination:

"I'm telling you, Tori, everything's absolutely fine here," Shane said into the mouthpiece of the phone. He was standing behind the front counter of Tori's shop, watching Dustin chase a live chicken around the racks of clothing and equipment. "We're all good."

I love it! ♥

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shoujokakumei December 24 2007, 00:02:01 UTC
Thank you. :) I'm glad other people think it's funny, lol, I was afraid it was just me. xD;

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rivulet027 December 13 2007, 16:57:10 UTC
Oh that was wonderful. I loved how you showed them helping Tori out so she could go help out. And the chicken...lol.

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