Okay, LJ works for me again (YAY!!!), so once more without the link!
Title: More Than Friends And Brothers 15.1: A Fun Day In Silver Hills
Author:
germankittyRelationship: Jason/Tommy
Rating: NC-17
Warning: None beyond the rating. :)
(
Fun And Games in Silver Hills )
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Still no fix for the posting problem in sight, though. *curses whichever idiot(s) was/were responsible*
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You wrote Jason's contest with Eric very well; it was tense and their competitiveness came through very clearly. It reminded me of that first match between Tommy and Jason in GWE way back when. Your choice to make it a draw made it even better, though, and seeing them decide that highlighted how mature Jason's become and how much he's grown, as well as the fact that he's dealt with his past with Eric and moved on.
=)
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There'll be more of life as a couple in future chapters. -- You're right, I was thinking of the GWE fight when I wrote the scene ... and since I couldn't decide on who should win (preference of course being Jason, but didn't want to be unfair to Eric), a draw seemed the obvious solution.
Thanks!
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