Loss, by Anita, Jack/Sky

[anitabuchan]

Title: Loss
Author: Anita
Relationship: Jack/Sky
Rating: 15
Warning: Bad language. Angst.

Comments

[kikos_ai]

;_;

I really like this. First off Kudos for not just ignoring Ally. Second, what really got to me in this story was Sky's controlled reaction. Its so heartbreaking, so sympathetic that I found myself not really caring about Jack's reasons and more concerned with Sky. Just..argh! Somebody has to run Jack over with the clue bus!! Multiple times, forward and backwards. Poor Sky.

Very well done, dear.

[anitabuchan]

Thanks! No, I hate fics that just ignore girlfriends so they can slash, without any explanations. And I'm very glad you liked Sky's reactions - I tried writing it from his POV, but it just didn't work so well.

[scifislasher]

Ouch. That hurts. Jack is so clueless here you feel like smacking him round the head. Trying to convince himself he's in love with Ally while knowing Sky's timetable off by heart and being so upset with Sky's reaction, or lack of one... denial, anyone?

[anitabuchan]

Thanks! Denial? Hmm...I was thinking about writing a sequel, but first I'd have to decide whether it is denial or not!

[scifislasher]

Sequel? Yes please! Soon? Pretty please?

[anitabuchan]

Have started writing it. Damn you, making me think about it.

[stranj100]

Sky's non-reaction hurts almost as much as Jack's denial. Poor , stupid boys.

[anitabuchan]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked :).

[anitabuchan]

Thanks! Yes, and the issues are what make it so fun :).

[mzdany]

I liked this ficlet, because it can't always be happy-happy. You did a good job showing both of their internal anguish. And it left me wanting to slap Jack upside the head and worse (and I probably have to get in line for that).

[anitabuchan]

Thanks! Well, someones already running Jack over with a clue bus, but if you're happy with the squashed remains, slap all you want!