Hmm I can totally see Bridge at a watermelon eating contest. Besides its always the small ones who win those contests, ya know? Anyways, this piece had a very peaceful tone to it; it reminded me of a lazy summer day.
Awww, a very nice Sky-moment, with the memories of shared good times (and I like how you so sneakily snuck the watermelon theme in there, lol). Nice introspection, too, with the subtle references to his gradually deepening feelings. So we're finally getting somewhere...;) Keem 'em coming! (The stories! I meant the stories!)
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Great writing as always. :)
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