Cold Comfort

[prpl_pen]

Title: Cold Comfort
Fandom: One Piece [MM canon]
Character/Pairing: Usopp & Lucci
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~3700
Notes: All right, so this will require a little explanation. This fic is based on mallowmateys canon (an RP I'm in). The biggest thing to know about that is that Lucci is reformed and a member of the Strawhats now; the Lucci in this fic is heavily

Comments

[strayswordsman]

I APPROVE MOST HIGHLY! :Db *STAMP OF MOST-HIGH APPROVAL*

That was so cute. It keeps hovering on the edge of being awkward when the usual take on this scenario is AWKWARD-SAUCE TO THE MAX. I really liked the little touches, too: Usopp smashing a ketchup star on his chest to fake being shot, lol, untying Usopp's shoes, Lucci just unhappily eyeing the bruise his grip made, etc. etc., so many good bits. And of course, SURPRISE!LEOPARD XD.

A+!

It should be canon to advance the cause of The Threesome!!

[warriorothesea]

Thank you Cam~ ♥

haha OUT OF FUCKING NOWHERE, IT'S LEOPARD!LUCCI!!!

I am cool with it being canon if Leone is!

[black_hat_cat]

AAAHHHHH.

I love this and love you and it is glorious. ashfajkag

I am...alarmed by how much Lucci's dialogue sounds like stuff I would write. It is kind of amazing. And surprise!leopard, haha, oh man. AND LEOPARD CUDDLES. THEY ARE SO CUTE. Oh man why don't I have an icon for this

I declare that this must be canon~

[warriorothesea]

THANK YOU LEONE I AM GLAD YOU LIKE IT~

Haha, well I was really nervous that I wasn't getting his voice right, so I'm glad you think I did him justice \o/ Yeah, this would be that random idea I mentioned off-handedly back in December, but I had to wait till Secret Santas were taken care of to try and write it. And pffft, yeaaah, I need to still make a Lucci+Usopp BFFs 4 lyfe icon, haha.

I'M DOWN WITH THAT.

[heartofstone22]

Wow. This is just so amazingly good!! I loved the tiny details and how realistic you've made things sound even with all the OP insanity woven in between.

Great job!

Need more Leopard!Lucci!!!

[warriorothesea]

Hee. THANKS, LOVER!!

isn't he cute

[faemous]

Oooh. I like this a lot, Jessie! Definitely needs to be canon. I am in such RP withdrawal this week I can´t wait to come homeeee.

♥

[warriorothesea]

YAY, thanks Fae~

I MISS YOU!!! ♥