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Experimenting

Jan 01, 2009 01:01

Title: Experimenting
Fandom: One Piece
Character/Pairing: Sanji/(female)Zoro
Rating: PG-13/R
Word Count: ~1200
Notes: Request fic written for maxine_chan/serasarahhhh with the prompt "Zoro/Sanji; genderswitch (girl!Zoro)." Loosely inspired by mallowmateys canon, but only in a very general way. First time writing for One Piece, so any comments/critiques/suggestions are especially ( Read more... )

one piece, one-shot, gift/request, genderswitch, romance, het (sort of), sex

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prpl_pen January 9 2009, 08:51:34 UTC

Eeek, that's a lot of expectation to live up to! Haha, but thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. :)

danbi January 1 2009, 20:32:18 UTC

lsdkfndsfd oh Jessie. That was seriously awesome. I know I already told you this, but you really have a way with writing women. EXCELLENTE!

the puckered white skin of Mihawk's scar isn't as sensitive to touch as the rest of her, and Sanji's fingers seem more ghost than flesh as they trace the path of it

Thank you for writing this sentence. I always read about scars being more sensitive, but I really think the opposite is true - and I loved seeing it here. Plus, the way you wrote it made it seem more sensual rather than dulled.

asldnfs really, a fun read. Thanks for linking me to the finished product! ♥

prpl_pen January 9 2009, 08:59:31 UTC

THANK YOU BRIIII~!

Ah, yeah, the scar thing...at least for me personally, scar tissue isn't as sensitive, or maybe it's just differently sensitive? Touch definitely feels different, at least. I like to try and play around with senses as much as I can, but sometimes it's hard to tell if a particular sentence is evocative in the way I mean it to be, so I'm glad it worked for you. :D

Thanks for reading! ♥

illezabeth January 8 2009, 20:21:18 UTC

Yuuummmmm ^______^ Sexy! I love how Zoro is blatantly insecure yet still the same as ever. My favourite part had to be those last few paragraphs though!
More like this please!!

prpl_pen January 9 2009, 09:02:04 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

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prpl_pen March 13 2009, 10:18:03 UTC

Thanks so much for reading; I'm glad you liked it. I appreciate the comment! :D

(Also random, but YAY The Thief & the Cobbler!)

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prpl_pen March 13 2009, 12:26:11 UTC

I'm pretty new to the fandom (this was my first One Piece fic, actually!), so I don't really know what's out there. I'm glad you were able to find this one & enjoy it, though. :) Hmm, I don't have any plans for one right now, but that doesn't mean it won't happen. I rarely plan fics out much in advance; they just sort of...happen. This is actually the first time I've written genderswitch too, that I can recall, though the idea of it has always intrigued me.

(I ♥ that movie!)

takatohedgehog April 2 2009, 19:24:11 UTC

Do you know how rare it is for me to like something from a pairing I hate?

I SALUTE YOU.

prpl_pen April 30 2009, 07:03:08 UTC

*SALUTES BACK!*