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The Most Important Thing

Sep 30, 2006 23:03

Title: The Most Important Thing
Fandom: Bleach
Character/Pairing: Rukia, Orihime
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~1400
Notes: Written to fulfill empath_eia's request in bleach_flashfic. This is my first (non-drabble) finished Bleach fic, so comments, critiques, and suggestions are especially welcome.

( Rukia turned and paused, her eyes fixed carefully on Orihime’s face. “Are you sure you want to do this now, Inoue?” )

bleach, one-shot, gift/request, general, friendship

Comments 8

empath_eia October 1 2006, 06:36:46 UTC

Oooh, yes, I do like it. I'm just as happy with gen as I am with smoosh. *GLOMP* They have such an interesting dynamic and I love to see it investigated. You've done a wonderful job and I can't thank you enough. THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU SMOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH XD

So much love. XDDDDDDD

prpl_pen October 1 2006, 17:49:13 UTC

You're very welcome! I'm so glad you liked it!

covet October 1 2006, 11:36:15 UTC

I'm not a huge Orihime fan, usually, but this is one of the best characterisations of her that I've seen in fic. I really enjoyed reading it :)

prpl_pen October 1 2006, 17:49:58 UTC

That's quite a compliment; thank you! :)

shalomdebbie October 1 2006, 12:22:38 UTC

I really enjoyed this!

prpl_pen October 1 2006, 17:50:15 UTC

Thanks!

the_firefly October 1 2006, 12:35:54 UTC

You did an awesome job with this. Especially when you chose to write two of the hardest characters to keep IC, ;) You have a wonderful balance of silly and serious Orihime and Rukia I'm not sure how to describe, but it felt like her character, :D I'm babbling!

oh crap, I guess this means I should actually start that fic now, eh? XD

prpl_pen October 1 2006, 17:53:26 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you thought they were IC; I honestly can't tell sometimes. I dunno. Too close to it or whatever.

but...yes! Write, write, write! XD