Fic: Eight Post-It Notes Written in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

May 03, 2011 17:26

Title: Eight Post-It Notes Written in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania.
Words: 1,171
Genre: Friendship, pre-slash, perhaps a smidge of angst.
Rating: PG
Characters: Chuck, Sam, Dean, Cas.
Spoilers: End of Season 5.
Disclaimer: These are not my characters. This is not my world. I am a trespasser.
Summary: The ending snuck up on him.

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angst, fic, cas, chuck, sam, supernatural, pre-slash, dean

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misachan May 3 2011, 23:43:29 UTC
There you go, making me feel sorry for God!Chuck when all I usually want to do is throw rotten fruit at him until he stops being such a terrible father.

And oh, Cas, still thinking he doesn't have a place! Sigh.

I'm so sad the series is ending! A new chapter always picks up my day.

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proxydialogue May 4 2011, 00:44:24 UTC
Haha, sorry to mess with your God!Chuck-anger. And sorry the series is ending. :( But thanks for sticking with me through the whole thing! :)

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city_of_words May 4 2011, 02:22:30 UTC
-Cas considers how Dean and Sam always walk in step with each other. They equal one whole unit together. Because of this, Castiel doesn’t really believe there is room for him. But whenever he goes to see them, Sam always smiles and Dean always pulls up a third chair. So Cas continues to answer them, and keeps looking for the cracks where he might slip in-

The Dean-Cas-Sam dynamic in a nut shell. Lovely.

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proxydialogue May 4 2011, 04:18:16 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you think so! :)

Thank you for reading.

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proxydialogue May 4 2011, 04:23:34 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it!

I feel like Chuck's story almost had to be a little tragic with the way they treat God in the canon.

And I'm glad you liked that line. (If authors were allowed to have favorites in their own writing, which I know is technically socially frowned upon, that would be mine.)

Your comment is wonderful. Thank you again.

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ebilchickens May 4 2011, 07:56:39 UTC
I like the small moments, all the moments you wrote really, and how they all flow into each other. Beautifully written, really like the style you use. The characterization is wonderful too. Very good series.

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proxydialogue May 4 2011, 15:44:55 UTC
Why thank you!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it. (And I'm relieved to hear they do flow into each other afterall. They started rather willy nilly and then suddenly found direction, so I crossed my fingers and tried to tie them all together. You're comment makes me very happy.) :)

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mcalex22 May 4 2011, 09:37:20 UTC
Just read all 5 parts! I'm not a heavy slasher... but I love little introspective stories like this. The way Chuck passes his days and the things he sees; it is very quiet, contemplative and beautiful. I love Castiel's relationship with the brothers and how he's always figuring things out in his angel way :)

I wonder if Chuck will ever return to the real SPN...?

Thanks for sharing :)

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proxydialogue May 4 2011, 15:49:10 UTC
Well thank you for reading despite the pre-slash label!! :) It says a lot (good things, I mean) about your character that you will give a chance to something that advertises itself as something you already know you're not a fan of. In the end, I think these ended up being more about Chuck than Cas and Dean.

I hope Chuck comes back. (crosses fingers)

Thank you again.

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