Other People (2/2)

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Part One

Comments

[mistyzeo]

Gorgeous, gorgeous stuff. Thank you for this.

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And thank you for reading. :)

[1trackmind]

Very nicely written!

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Thank you!

[talimenios79]

I really enjoyed this.

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I really enjoy that you enjoyed it.

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Thank you. :)

[trenchkamen]

This is a wonderful deconstruction piece, and speaks to the validity of a character in chaos, or the microcosm within each person. It is insanely hard to address variability and shock and spontaneity without veering into being out of character. Only skilled writers can do this.

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Well color me bashful.

Thank you. This is a great comment to get b/c those are facets of the story I worried over constantly.