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[proximoception]

Past the obvious Keats bird, a touch of Lycidas & co. in the form and flora and presumably some bits of Lowell himself, I'm wondering how much Diffugere Nives lies behind North Haven. Maybe even Housman's version, since she was a fan of his

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[nightspore]

Death of Argos?

[proximoception]

Good point. Though he should have gone to that dog at once.

[nightspore]

I love this. Interesting, very, misquotation you foist on it. Alteration. Change. But you're totally right about Housman, and Stevens, and I didn't see either of those before.

[proximoception]

Sad to dear? The rest was intentional foisting.

Sad, fun leaving him at a loss - forgot these parts. And "derange," but must have remembered them on some level as they support what I'm saying better than anything I allude to does. Criticism of religion is here too, just as in the fire balloon poem.

[nightspore]

Cannot to did not?

[proximoception]

Delib foistage.

[proximoception]

Or is it that the heart you'll have tomorrow is your heir? Not even your heart will have what once it had