More anniversary challenge fic!

[zea_taylor]

Title:             First Kiss
Author:         zea_taylor
‘Verse:          G1, sequel to ‘Fall’
Rating:          T/PG-13
Characters:   Jazz/Prowl
Warnings:      kissing?

Comments

[rose0mary]

Lovely piece.

Prowl's right: his version is a proper first kiss.
Jazz, um, oops.
At least the misunderstanding is cleared up before terrible things happen because they are out-of-sync.
Good thing the cons couldn't take advantage of the rare opportunity. And that Prime helped give the nudge back to normalcy.

[zea_taylor]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it - I guess these things happen, but this pair are too sensible to let it go on too long. And that's without a Prime looking over their shoulders! Thanks for commenting.

[whitefirebird]

This? Is brilliant!

I especially like that it's in the same continuity as Fall...
And that other thing is headed your way, sometime tonight.

[zea_taylor]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it. Seeing the prompt, I couldn't resist playing with the time between 'Fall' and their landing on Earth :)

[playswithworms]

Fun to see a continuation of "Fall"! And oh dear, the path to first kiss does not run smooth, poor things. Love the moment when Prowl turns the tables ^_^

[zea_taylor]

When does anything ever run smooth for this pair? ;)

It just seemed natural to me that Jazz would make the first move, but Prowl would be the first to understand it - that more or less encapsulates their personalities! Thanks for commenting :)

[fianna9]

Nice to see Prowl get the upper hand some times. Jazz, you're lucky he figured out what you really meant. Great story.

[zea_taylor]

Thanks for the comment - I'm pleased that you enjoyed it :) And yep, just occasionally, Prowl really is the one who takes control.

[prowl]

If this was any sweeter I could die. I loved it and how Prowl said he had hoped the first kiss would be...priceless! :D

[zea_taylor]

Jazz worked out sweeter and more confused than I intended in this one - it was left to Prowl to take control. Fortunately, he proved himself more than adequate to the job!

[prowl]

Jazz was but Prowl did well and both were so cute at the end. Very much adequate!! :D