Anniversary Challenge fic 5/7

[eerian_sadow]

Title: Silver Tongue
Universe: Bayverse
Rating: G
Content Advisory: none
Characters: Prowl, Jazz
Prompt: Under Cover
Notes: written for the 2014 anniversary challenge at prowlxjazz.

Comments

[fianna9]

Very amusing. Especially them leaving Smokescreen hanging like that.

[eerian_sadow]

Thanks!

That's what Smokey gets for trying to call shenanigans. ;)

[zea_taylor]

So funny! I love how much you've left to the imagination here. The tension of the opening scene contrasts wonderfully with the way you leave Smokey (and us!) hanging at the end.

The way the Decepticon described Prowl as 'smooth' I'm even finding myself wondering if *he* was under cover too. I wouldn't put it past the mech.

Thanks for sharing.

[eerian_sadow]

i'm so glad you like it! i'm always unsure whther or not vagueness works when i'm so close to the material.

maaaaaaybe.

you're welcome!

[anothersquirrel]

I like that Smokey's having a hard time believing the story, and then he doesn't even get to hear the rest of it. lol

[eerian_sadow]

if he hadn't been such a doubter, they would have told him.

[kkcliffy]

Their escape must have been amazing! I love how Smokscreen didn't believe them. And how Jazz wanted to laugh at Prowl being called "smooth."

[eerian_sadow]

oh it was. ~_^

Smokescreen has a lot of trouble believing a lot of Jazz's stories, and he finds it equally unbelievable that Prowl was dragged into this one. He's dead sure they're setting him up for some kind of prank or something.

Prowl can be smooth when he wants to be, but Jazz will never believe it. (not even after he's seen it in action.)

[renegadewriter8]

LOL Now I'm wondering why it was confidential hahaha

[eerian_sadow]

because there are some things the unbelievers just don't get to know. ~_^