Cold Spark - Part 9

[sideslip_tf]

Title: Cold Spark (Chapter 9 of

Comments

[bluetaelon]

I'll read after the kids are in bed, did you ever write the Ratchet/Wheeljack arc?:)

[sideslip_tf]

This is a different story than the "Bond" series. I have started a draft of the Ratchet and Wheeljack arc (Bond of Desire) but I was feeling bad that I never finished this story when there were so many unanswered questions. The first eight chapters were written over a year ago. Hopefully the change in writing style isn't too disruptive...

[bluetaelon]

I would rather see a writer improve then back-step just to keep the writing style consistent although I did notice a few errors. Did you want me to edit it and PM it to you?

[sideslip_tf]

Yes, please. I appreciate the help!

[bluetaelon]

ok, Jazz is being an ASS, poor Prowl, you just want to hug him and beat the slag outta Jazz! Hope Ratch figures it out soon and fixes it!

[sideslip_tf]

There is a reason. It seemed like a good reason when I started writing this over a year ago. I think it still makes sense although it will require a bit of explanation. Prowl really is suffering but it is because his subroutines are affected as well.

[renegadewriter8]

T.T Poor Prowler! But aww I'm glad you updated, Jazz stop being so stubborn! ¬¬ can't wait to see more! ^^

[sideslip_tf]

Prowl is hurting and Jazz is being stubborn. At least in Jazz's defense he does recognize it but he really is helpless fighting the altered subroutines.

[wicked3659]

Oh Jazz would have been spark broken if he'd known what Prowl just put himself for him. *hugs Prowl* How much time is lost when hurt is involved, so sad. I hope Jazz gives Prowl some sign that his efforts are paying off.

[thalanee]

Yay, you're back with this story!
:D

Love the new chapter, and I so want to hug poor Prowl.

Though I'm kind of amazed, that Jazz didn't notice Prowl was in pain. He knows how sensitive Prowl'S wings are, doesn't he?