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April 2011 Challenge

Apr 20, 2011 21:54

Title: A Bond of Convenience (Chapter 18 of 18) written for the April 2011 challenge
Verse: G1 AU
Rating: PG
Characters: Prowl, Jazz, Optimus, and one more surprise at the end
Warnings: none
Summary: Prowl thanks Optimus for finding Jazz for him

( A Bond of Convenience )

multi chapter, prowlxjazz, challenge: april 11, au, poster: sideslip_tf, rated pg

Comments 18

femme4jack April 21 2011, 04:48:19 UTC

This was SO much fun. I love Elita's role in it. *mysterious Prime was mysterious*. Hee hee. Great work. Thanks for updating so frequently! That is SO hard to do.

sideslip_tf April 22 2011, 02:29:03 UTC

Prime has to have some secrets. Yes, a few nights I thought I wasn't going to make it. It was tough but I'm pleased by the result.

prowlerprime April 21 2011, 06:57:30 UTC

That was an excellent story. I would definitely love to see it again from Prowl's POV and maybe end it with a sparkling. :) That's my vote! :)

Elita is so sneaky! hehe

sideslip_tf April 22 2011, 02:30:34 UTC

Prowl's POV is in the works. A sparkling... depends on what some other characters do in the universe inside my mind!

wicked3659 April 21 2011, 07:18:41 UTC

What a wonderful ending to a wonderful story. :3

I think the story is beautiful as is but personally I would love to see some of the obstacles Jazz and Prowl had to face in getting to know each other, surely Jazz's patience wore thin for a klik or Prowl and he clashed over something, their personalities being so different after all. I would like to see more of their relationship develop and obstacles they overcame :3 maybe I'm a realist I don't know, I guess I can't have my fairy tale until they've wade through the pits to get there... ^_^;;; *hides*

I love this story!

sideslip_tf April 22 2011, 02:34:33 UTC

Thank you.

I was thinking about how Jazz would have worked through the problems he faced and who he would talk to. That certainly will get written - but it also produced a plot bunny. Then I got to thinking about the political structure of this universe and that produced two more bunnies. *runs screaming out of the room*

Realism is good. :)

thalanee April 21 2011, 08:09:47 UTC

I didn't review before, but I want to tell you how much I loved this story! It was great work.

It would definetely be wonderful to read more about the difficulties they had (did Jazz ever snap or lose hope? Surely the had arguments?) and the rewards that will come later (sparklings, surprise when Prowl ends up carrying instead of Jazz...). So I can only add my voice to the others with a big "More please!"

sideslip_tf April 22 2011, 02:36:00 UTC

Thanks! I appreciate the feedback.

Wow! Several people have said they want to see Prowl carry. That could be very amusing. I guess it would make for plenty of gossip in Praxus.

anavidbookworm April 26 2011, 18:11:21 UTC

The ending with Elita just made me laugh which was a great conclusion to this tale. I enjoyed it immensely and would love to read more.

Here's two of my random ideas for places the story could go.
1. I like the sparkling idea and love it when cannon characters are used instead of OCs. I have no great problem with well written OCs but enjoy the added depth to stories when cannon characters are used since we know how they turn out. :)
2. If you want to go for angst, then have the great war begin in this verse. How does Prowl, Jazz, and any sparklings survive the beginnings of the war and/or the destruction of Praxus? How do they meet the Ark crew? How does all of these developments affect their relationship?
I hope that helps, but whatever you decide I'll be looking forward to reading it. :)