that was a fantastic chapter, and i love how you wrote Prowl's character in this whilst he's dealing with the temporary loss of his battle computer. loved it and can't wait for the next update! :)
Great chapter! I like how Prowl is putting on a front in front of everyone else had me convinced. You write them all brilliantly. Cant wait for more... have a feeling Prowl may end up blurting out his feelings for Jazz... ;) *waits impatiently for next update*
Awwww this was awesome. Poor Prowl, not being able to control himself. Meh, maybe this way he'll admit his feelings for Jazz right? Wow the twins keep getting more and more surprises from Prowl. hehe Update soon!
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