Fiction - Mea Culpa

[snugsbunny]

 Title: Mea Culpa
Rating: I'm making this a mild R
Universe: AU movieverse set on cybertron
Characters: Jazz, Prowl, Barricade, Optimus Prime, Ironhide and mention of Megatron
Pairings: JazzxProwlxBarricade kinda
Warnings: Slash, 100 tons of uber angst, dark fic

Disclaimer: No ownage = no sueage

Authors note:  Sooo, I know I said it was a one shot, but

Comments

[snugsbunny]

Yep Jazz is certainly going through the ringer. Glad you liked it babeXDD

*hugs*

D:

[rainlightautumn]

Oh, darling, this just broke my heart, every single bit of it.

Prowl's description was horrible, but very well written. I felt so much sympathy for him. And Jazz listening to it and still holding him...oh!

The progression of Prowl's descent into Barricade was wonderful if painful.

And then the end. Oh, Jazz.

I can't wait to see the rest of this. And I'm happy to take some of the blame if it means we get to read stuff like this!

Though I am tempted to wack you with kitty's fluff wand. Just one small wack. A love tap, really. XD

*hugs*

Re: D:

[snugsbunny]

I'm glad that his cescent into Barricade showed through.

And don't worry, the fluff wand is working it's magic

*snuggles*

[__wilderness__]

Wow... you certainly get all the emotions going there! Fantastic!

[snugsbunny]

Thank you, I can honestly say this has been a very intense series to write.

thanks for reading.

*huggles*

[vejiraziel]

You make me ache for these two so bad @_@ but the whole thing was written so wonderfully. Gaaah I wish these two could have a happy ending, but more than likely, this won't. TT-TT s'cuse me, i need a moment to find the kleenex.

[snugsbunny]

I ache for them too. its so unfair they have to be the pawns in this war ;__;

*snuggles*

[bluebirdsoaring]

It's like watching a train wreck in slow motion...both of our bots are just doing their jobs, but it's destroying the best of who they are as sure as anything! The increasing violence of their meetings leading up to one last gentle sharing as lovers and not enemies. But what did Prowl do in that last joining...has he finally given over to his Cade programming, taking that one precious file from Jazz through deceptively gentle methods? Or did Jazz give it to him willingly? I'm so excited you are continuing this ficcy...wow!

[snugsbunny]

You know that describes this perfectly. A train wreck in slow motion.

And as for your questions, you'll just have to wait for the final part.

thanks for reading XDD

hugs*

[bluebirdsoaring]

Ya, I know I gotta wait =) I like to be surprised with everyone else! This continues to be amazing!!!! Now I've got "Runaway Train" in my head for these two =)