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Fiction - I love you, I'll kill you

Feb 26, 2009 22:23

This fic has been inspired by the recent Hate Sex fics that have been posted recently.

It is a very different take on the Hate Sex theme and could possibly be considered non-con. Heed the warning please, if you don't like, please don't read.

Reviews are very welcome as I'd love to know what your take is on this little drabble.

Title: I love you, I'll ( Read more... )

oneshot, angst, rated r, poster: snugsbunny, fan fiction, smut, character: jazz only, tf-bayverse, drabbles, dark fic, character: prowl only

Comments 31

vejiraziel February 26 2009, 23:16:23 UTC

Wow, that was... quite the ride. I have to admit I loved the way this one pulls at the emotional strings, the interfacing was nicely done and all, but to be honest the sheer emotional barrage, the betrayal, hurt... it was so intense.

I feel so bad for both of them, especially for Jazz first thinking his lover has betrayed him and their cause, now knowing he hasn't, that must add such a load to an already pretty hurt mech.

This is beautiful, and I thank you for this particular take in this 'hate sex' trend.

snugsbunny February 27 2009, 02:00:07 UTC

*blushes* Thank you so much for your review. It was an intense fic to write. I'm glad that the important points, Jazz's emotions and Prowl's sacrifice stood out. The smut was really just a background to everything going on between these two and the war they are involved in.

*huggles tight*

bluebirdsoaring February 26 2009, 23:38:52 UTC

Wow, this is one pit of a ride! I can't decide who I feel worse for, Jazz or Prowl =( It's like they are both being made the sacrifice to win the war...although Prowl is literally risking his skin, Jazz might lose his sanity! I'd love to see more...lots of angst possible. And what a twist on the theme...and a really mad Jazz for the win!

snugsbunny February 27 2009, 02:01:40 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

And I agree with you, through all of this it is Jazz and Prowl that are being sacrificed. But then, such is the case with war. The good of the many and so forth...

*hugs*

bluebirdsoaring February 27 2009, 02:44:20 UTC

And I just had a new thought as I reread this little bit...poor Prowl having to act like that to Jazz, like he was going to take him against his will...and that moment their systems joined, Prowl must have been touched by the fact Jazz was still hopeful (hadn't changed his codes) and that probably gave him the strength to complete his task...I'm just worried what he will have to do the next time as a cover!

snugsbunny February 27 2009, 03:08:29 UTC

Well the good thing is that Prowl has already made plans for their cover by convincing Megatron that he's going to steal information from Jazz whenever they meet up. And now the bunneh bites even more *headdesk*

At this rate this thing is gonna have more sequels than Rocky.

But thanks for sharing that. My own thought was that Jazz couldn't bare to change his codes because then he would be erasing every reminder of Prowl from his body and he just couldn't do it.

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butterbean137 February 27 2009, 00:07:11 UTC

WOW. Pr0nz with actual PLOT! And, might I add, rather wonderful plot at that! Poor Jazzy, though. And poor Prowler. But you're going to write a sequal and make everything all better, right?

And so sorry to hear about your keyboard issues. That's gotta be frustrating!

snugsbunny February 27 2009, 02:07:42 UTC

Glad you enjoyed babe. And thanks to cave_cat prodding me on msn it looks as though there will be a sequel in the works. The kitty is determined to turn me into a fluffy bunny ;D

Yeah, the keyboard issues are frustrating. But fear not, I shall have a new keyboard...one day XDD

*huggles*

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snugsbunny February 27 2009, 02:38:58 UTC

*gulp*

rainlightautumn February 27 2009, 01:30:55 UTC

This was amazing. My heart just hurt for Jazz, and then at the end for Prowl. :c The ups and downs this took me on were crazy. I couldn't help but think about what happens in the movie, when Jazz dies. How would your Barricade react to that? And then that made me think about what all Jazz and Prowl would have to go through after this fic, and it made me lust for more of this verse from you.

Wonderful job, sweets! Thanks so much for sharing.

snugsbunny February 27 2009, 02:10:44 UTC

*blushes* Thank you, this is wonderful all the thoughts it gave you, and in turn inspire me as cave-cat inspired me to write a sequel. And thanks to this review I know which direction to go now.

so I now hold cave_cat and you responsible for my breeding bunnies XDD

*Hugglessnugglescuddles* Cos I haven't been able to do that to you for far too long

rainlightautumn February 27 2009, 04:30:46 UTC

*grins* Anything to help, sweets! And, you know, anything to keep this going, cos the more I think about it, the more I love it. XDDD

*snuggles close* <333

prowlsgirl February 27 2009, 01:36:53 UTC

Oh wow. Quite an interesting plot.

snugsbunny February 27 2009, 02:11:15 UTC

Thank you. It kind of crept up on me. But glad you enjoyed it.

*hugs*