[fic] Accident

Jun 17, 2008 14:42

*shuffles out of hiding* Uh, hi! Lookit what I did! >.> I'm actually not entirely happy with this. It didn't come out the way I intended it to really, but...I've been stuck on it for long enough, and I'm already half-way through #8, so I might as well post it. Suggestions always welcome, as well as corrections of any type. Sorry mmouse, didn't ( Read more... )

poster: vericus, multi chapter, fan fiction: 2008, tf-g1: 07-08, rated r, prowlxjazz: 08

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kyra_neko_rei June 17 2008, 21:14:31 UTC
*delight delight delight* AWESOME!!!!

"It's called a ceiling." Jazz snickered.

WIN!!!!

"Just...tell me one thing. How the frag do you accidentally bond?!"

And more win!

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vericus June 18 2008, 05:26:24 UTC
Heh. Those are the two lines I like the most out of the fic...oddly, the first one was only added on the last edit, right before I posted. It fit in there wonderfully, though. XD

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kyra_neko_rei June 18 2008, 05:54:10 UTC
Yeah . . . that was perfect.

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vejiraziel June 17 2008, 21:45:34 UTC
Squeeeee you live and post again! And my favorite series of yours nonetheless! *rolls in glee*

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vericus June 18 2008, 05:27:14 UTC
I think this is everybody's favourite series, lol.

...

possibly because it's my only non-crack series. *cough*

But that's besides the point! I live and I have posted! And I have a new icon of awesomeness!

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childofatlantis June 17 2008, 21:48:39 UTC
Oh yay, more! :D

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prowlstar June 18 2008, 00:03:18 UTC
Squee!

"It's called a ceiling."

Nearly died of laughter reading this, I've been dying for more from this little series, and now I can't wait for the next part!

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dark_daebereth June 18 2008, 00:13:47 UTC
It's here! Wheeeee!
Oh, awesome, pure and utter. <3 everything about this. Mirage having nothing better to do than follow his superior officer around with a bucket of mud all day. The -whole- confusion and that last line, "How the frag do you accidentally bond?!"
Is wonderful!!

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vericus June 18 2008, 05:28:51 UTC
I have this feeling that Mirage could be the ultimate prankster if he wanted to, but considers it too easy because of his cloak, lol.

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