Comments | prowlxjazz: Life is a Tree

i_stalk_piccolo in prowlxjazz

Life is a Tree

Jun 10, 2008 20:36

I come bearing ficcage :)

TITLE: Life is a Tree
AUTHOR: Me :)
SUMMARY: Each root and limb connected to the same trunk.
GENRE: Angst/Romance
CHAPTERS: 6
STATUS: COMPLETE
RATING: M
WARNINGS: Slash, bad language and some violence.
PAIRING: JazzxProwl
NOTES: Sequel to "Light"
UNIVERSE: TF: Animated

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fan fiction: 2008, rated r, poster: i_stalk_piccolo, prowlxjazz: 08, tf-animated

Comments 15

vejiraziel June 11 2008, 03:47:59 UTC

Been waiting since the first update till it was complete and posted here to comment. (I wanna use my TFA PJ Icon dammit! *cough*)

Anyway, I am totally loving this one, it was hot, sexy and the way you describe things with so much detail and can create alien robot-compliant versions of things like junk food and other stuff are really awesome.

And I totally loved the bonding scene, it was gorgeous. *bows down*

i_stalk_piccolo June 11 2008, 03:52:29 UTC

*blushes so much* This has my heart in it, as does everything else I write.

I'm so glad you loved it and thanks for reading :)

sakon76 June 11 2008, 05:58:08 UTC

*love!*

The first fic in this mileu was awesome and this one completely lives up to it. *happy sigh* Particularly the two of them figuring out that they've met before... and Prowl teaching Jazz how to see without eyes....

Optimus knows or has figured it out, hasn't he? Hasn't he??

Any chance of further stories in this series?

i_stalk_piccolo June 11 2008, 06:09:25 UTC

Optimus doesn't know, no, though I'm tempted to have him find out someday in the future. Depends on what my muses want to do. Optimus knows Prowl has a secret though. He's good, but not THAT good, if you know what I mean ^^

kyme June 11 2008, 09:41:20 UTC

Dude. You have no idea how long and hard I've been pining for your sequel to Light. This is so kickass. I'm gonna enjoy reading it repeatedly. Thank you so much for your contribution to my ways of distracting myself. XD

i_stalk_piccolo June 11 2008, 15:22:30 UTC

LOL! Thank YOU for wanting to get on this ride :)

nekohitori June 11 2008, 17:56:00 UTC

I was waiting for this one, too. It was just the right amount of hotness with romantic fluff. You deserve hugs for this. Also, since I'm horrible at leaving reviews on ffn, I also wanted to say that "Light" was one of the few things that kept me sane during finals. So, *applauds* a winner is you!

When did rocks take the shape of Prowl's small, attractive aft?

Best. Line. Ever.

i_stalk_piccolo June 11 2008, 20:27:48 UTC

LOL I giggled writing that line XD

Aww, I'm glad I kept you somewhat sane during finals. They suck monkey balls. *hugs* I'm gonna give you hugs for reading it. Thanks so much! <3

nekohitori June 13 2008, 14:14:37 UTC

Aaaaaand I just noticed that I said "also" twice in one sentence. *headdesks*

Oooooh yeah. Best brain-break ever. And they very much did suck monkey balls. So, double hugs for you for writing it! *hug-zors*

delilahdraken June 11 2008, 18:58:29 UTC

You know, this is one fine example of good story telling.

The best thing, beside the Prowl/Jazz romance, was the scene where Optimus talks to Prowl and sort of tells him that he knows Prowl is blind and that is doesn't matter to him. Do I see the foreshadowing of another sequel there?

Anyway, I bow before your art.

i_stalk_piccolo June 11 2008, 20:29:16 UTC

Actually, Optimus doesn't know ;) But Prowl doesn't know that so I can see why the readers might get confused--which is the point, since Prowl is confused there as well. I do want to write something where he finds out in the future. Depends on what the muses decide to do. But Optimus would keep the secret. Little ones he might slip on, but a life or death secret he'll take to his grave.