Drabbles

[snugsbunny]

Okay a couple of drabbles here. They have little notes with them that explains them. For some reason I couldn't write anything on Once tonight. Am feeling a little melancholy and it was the second drabble that caught me off guard tonight.

This I think will be used in Once... I wrote it last night just off the cuff It is not spell-checked and

Comments

[tvcatbarn]

The first made me undeniably happy and really, really hopeful that the ending to that little moment won't STAY with them being ripped apart.

Second was HEART WRENCHING.

[snugsbunny]

Heh, I have to admit the blood sugar was playing havoc last night when I posted it. Was thinking this morning that maybe it wasn't such a good idea. My biggest, and irational, fear is what will people think of me for posting weird things like this.

Though glad you enjoyed the first and the second, well not sure what I think of it myself. But it was good to get the emotion out.

Thanks for reading, you take care honey.

[dark_daebereth]

*hugs* Writing -is- such a good therapy. Looking for or not, I'm so sorry about your brother, and I agree, the finality of death and life just hits you sometimes. It's a lovely drabble too, you really capture the light of life going on around him, and the lack of in Jazz.

[snugsbunny]

You ain't kidding. And personally, I think I need all the therapy I can get with my confused noggin ;)

I just remembered that day so clearly yesterday, I don't know why it came to me, but sometimes we need to express ourselves. Poor Jazz and Prowl, it looks as though they are going to end up channelling all my angst ;)

Thanks for your kind words, they are appreciated and yeah, I can admit I was feeling sorry for myself when I wrote it. It just seems so unfair that the world goes on when sometimes you just want it to stop and mourn with you. Ack, there I go getting all deep and thoughtful again.

Thanks for reading and giving your thoughts.

Take care Sweets :)

[vejiraziel]

Both of thes were really beautiful. I'm so sorry for your lose and I'm glad you can find some kind of reprieve in your writing. The second is beautiful but sad, and yet so true. *hug*

The first one, though, I really hope we see more of this one because it's all kinds of amazing.

[snugsbunny]

Thank you, and you are right writing is a reprieve and does help to channel out the stuff you have a hard time admitting.

The first one is definitely going to be fleshed out into the Once story line.

Thank you for reading and leaving a lovely comment.

Take care honey.

[mmouse15]

My condolences to you on the death of your brother. I am glad that you were able to write out your emotion; I hope it helped. It was sad but beautiful, and your imagery was wonderful.

I really like the first one, too. Very different than the second, but also intriguing! Please write more around that idea - I'd love to read it!

[snugsbunny]

Ahh, thank you for your sweet comments. I'm surprised what came out of my mind for such an off-the-cuff drabble.

The first one is definitely pegged to go into the Once storyline so will be expanded on for sure.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Take care of yourself, honey.