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2011 Challenge Week 4: prompt: Save me, I'm lost

Oct 07, 2011 10:19

Title: With a Little Help from My Friend
Prompt: Save me, I'm lost
Universe: G1 AU
Rating: pg-13
Characters: Prowl, Jazz, Optimus, Ratchet, Ironhide, Blaster, Ultra Magnus
Warnings: none
Summary: After rescuing as many Praxians as they could after the destruction of Praxus, Optimus and Jazz realize there is so much more they need to do for the survivors ( Read more... )

challenge 2011, prowlxjazz

Comments 5

renegadewriter8 October 7 2011, 19:14:07 UTC

Awwww poor Prowl! This was beautifully written! With a lot of emotion great job! *cries and hugs Prowl*

bluetaelon October 7 2011, 21:09:40 UTC

This was lovely:)

fianna9 October 7 2011, 22:27:47 UTC

Prowl's situation really drives home how much the survivors lost. It's good to see Prime and Jazz helping him recover. Very well written.

wicked3659 October 8 2011, 00:11:10 UTC

I really liked the original take on this. A very sweet friendship has blossomed here, very nicely done! :3

usagi_atemu_tom October 8 2011, 11:27:31 UTC

Very nice, little story. Well written with the perfect mix where the reader can still feel the sadness and loss Praxus' destruction left behind. Yet, Jazz antics and the little group of close friends around Prime left a feeling of hope.
Oh and I liked the little teaser at the end, where Jazz predicted Prowl one day outranking him while Prowl could not believe that possibility. It made me smile of course.