Comments | prowlerprime: Delightful December Day 16: Someone's delivering/having a baby 6/8

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Delightful December Day 16: Someone's delivering/having a baby 6/8

Feb 16, 2011 07:46

Title: Miracles Do Happen 6/8
Day: 16
Prompt: Someone's delivering/having a baby
*Verse: G1-AU
Rating: PG-13
Other Characters: Jazz, Prowl, Optimus, Ratchet, Ironhide, Bumblebee, the twins
Warnings: mild fluff, mild language
Summary/Notes: Prowl and Jazz are having a sparkling. But of course nothing goes as planned. This fic was getting way too long! ( Read more... )

fluff, challenge 2010, delighful december, prowlxjazz

Comments 15

bluetaelon February 16 2011, 16:16:54 UTC

awwww:) I never got that "my kid is the most beautiful thing I've ever seen at birth" thing with my kids though, with the last one I actually asked if they were sure it came outta me!? I thought both my kids were ugly at birth lol, still do:) I mean now their cute kids but at birth? Nope!

prowlerprime February 16 2011, 16:52:44 UTC

Well...these are robots. Prowl didn't have to force the sparkling out a narrow passage. lol. And between Ratchet and Wheeljack I'm sure the sparkling already had a shine to him once he was cleaned up. lol I did put that pop in there. my mom told me her water broke with a popping noise in the deliveryroom the day my bro was born.

Thanks for reading! :D

prancingtiger86 February 16 2011, 17:30:50 UTC

*squees* iddy biddy sparkling has arrived in the world! fantastically written as always hun, loved it! :)

prowlerprime February 16 2011, 18:56:00 UTC

*blushes* Thank you! :)

I never get tired of those moments between them. :)

Are there going to be some from you with the little twins in growing pains?! :P

prancingtiger86 February 16 2011, 19:46:05 UTC

there might be once i've battled through the other one shots and renascentia, the next chapter is gonna have to be split into two halves because its gonna be quite long.

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prowlerprime February 23 2011, 17:26:18 UTC

:D:D

anavidbookworm February 16 2011, 18:48:11 UTC

This chapter had an excellent flow to it which was actually quite calming and relieving by the end. It ended so well that I had to check the top again to see that we still have 2 chapters left. Now I'm curious where we'll be going from here. Can't wait to see.

prowlerprime February 16 2011, 18:57:53 UTC

Well...one chapter and an epilogue. I started ch 1 (or 2) with Jazz and wanted to end it with him. :)

prowlerprime February 23 2011, 17:25:23 UTC

It was all one story originally but was getting to long to be considered a one shot. Some pov's cooperated better than others. lol

Thanks for reading. next chapter will be up soon.

renegadewriter8 February 16 2011, 18:48:18 UTC

YEY Tango has arrived!! Can't wait for the next two chapters!

prowlerprime February 23 2011, 17:23:04 UTC

I love sparklings! lol

more will be up soon! :D