Comments | prowlerprime: Delightful December Day 16: Someone's having/delivering a baby 4/8

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Delightful December Day 16: Someone's having/delivering a baby 4/8

Feb 09, 2011 07:37

Title: Miracles Do Happen 4/8
Day: 16
Prompt: Someone's delivering/having a baby
*Verse: G1-AU
Rating: PG-13
Other Characters: Jazz, Prowl, Optimus, Ratchet, Ironhide, Bumblebee, the twins
Warnings: mild fluff, mild language
Summary/Notes: Prowl and Jazz are having a sparkling. But of course nothing goes as planned. This fic was getting way too long! ( Read more... )

challenge 2010, delighful december, prowlxjazz

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amiricol February 9 2011, 16:42:08 UTC

I can't wait to read more of this!
Ironhide went to rescue Jazz didn't he??? Go Ironhide!!!!

^_^

prowlerprime February 10 2011, 18:26:07 UTC

:D

*breaks out the pompoms!*

wicked3659 February 9 2011, 17:49:28 UTC

Ohhhhh I also second the opinion that Ironhide went for Jazz! :3 stubborn old mech he'll show those 'cons! Loved this entry, you write a superb Optimus.

prowlerprime February 10 2011, 18:25:15 UTC

hehe Thanks! Optimus is my number one fav mech to write with P&J as a close second. :)

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prowlerprime February 10 2011, 18:23:39 UTC

You are the only one who commented on the sparkling's name! Thank you! :)

lol, Hide is a cowboy isn't he?! hehe

Thanks so much for reading :D

anavidbookworm February 9 2011, 18:30:15 UTC

The sparkling is okay. :) At least for now. And Ironhide is probably out trying to save Jazz. I'm so happy. No doubt there us still more drama in store but this was a nice chapter with a rather feel good stopping point. I still want to know how the twins knew about the sparkling though.

prowlerprime February 10 2011, 18:21:52 UTC

not too much more drama. this fic was too long for a one shot so I just broke it down.

Thanks for reading! :D

prancingtiger86 February 9 2011, 19:43:24 UTC

c'mon Jazz get ur aft back to the base pronto, you can't miss this for the world. Great chapter hun, I'm glad Optimus was so understanding, although we all know he's a good and fair mech. loved it and can't wait for the next update! :)

prowlerprime February 10 2011, 18:20:29 UTC

she lives!!!!!!!! lol

Glad to see you back in the game. Loved the new chapter of growing pains.

Thanks for reading! Glad you're enjoying it. And yes, Optimus has always been kind and understanding. :) What a mech. lol!

prancingtiger86 February 10 2011, 19:32:52 UTC

XDD I certainly do lol. And I got ur review hun, but FF.Net has been a complete pain about not letting me reply back to some of them.

prowlerprime February 11 2011, 19:48:31 UTC

FFN can be a pain in the aft at times. As long as you got the review!

So...any Renascentia coming our way? hehe

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