30 Days and 30 Nights: Day 26

Sep 26, 2010 12:44

Title: 30 Days and 30 Nights
Day: 26
Prompt: Regrets
*Verse: G1 AU
Rating: pg-13
*Words: 2457
Other Characters: Prowl, Jazz, Streetwise, Smokescreen, Ratchet, Ironhide, Bumblebee
Warnings: tissues needed
Summary:  A continuation of prompt 21.  Jazz arrives in the devasted city of Praxus while Prowl struggles in the death that's around him.
Notes: No I still ( Read more... )

30 days and 30 nights, angst, challenge 2010, prowlxjazz

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insane_no_baka September 26 2010, 19:59:33 UTC
*wibbles* The part with the tiny hand and Prowl just about crushed me. Though I'm glad they got their happy ending...they deserve it! ;;;___________;;;;

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prowlerprime September 26 2010, 20:01:42 UTC
oh...it's not over yet! lol. Prowl stil has no idea he's a daddy! note the TBC hehe

and yes, I was crying my eyes out when writing that scene with Prowl. Hence the tissue warnings.

Thanks for reading!! :D

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prancingtiger86 September 26 2010, 20:10:18 UTC
*sits and gapes at the screen* You can't leave it there! this demands a sequel, Prowl needs to know about the sparkling!! Fantastically written hun, loved it! :)

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prowlerprime September 26 2010, 20:13:00 UTC
It IS TBC!!!! lol

Thanks so much!! Glad you enjoyed it. And yes, Prowl will find out he's a daddy in the final fic for this story line.

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wicked3659 September 26 2010, 22:49:23 UTC
This was really well done! A lovely fic, I can't wait for the next part ^__^ <3

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prowlerprime September 26 2010, 23:06:11 UTC
Thank you! :D Glad you liked it.

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renegadewriter8 September 27 2010, 02:30:04 UTC
This was so well written! Poor Prowl, seeing all the devastation! The part with the sparkling was really sad! So happy the ending was a good one.

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prowlerprime September 27 2010, 02:38:54 UTC
It's not over yet. :) Prowl doesn't know about the sparkling Jazz is carrying. So there's more yet to come! :D

Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it. :D

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mmouse15 September 27 2010, 03:18:02 UTC
Oh, holy smokes. Thanks for the tissue warning - I definitely needed them. That part where Prowl found the little hand just broke me.

I'm looking forward to the last part, to see Prowl's reaction to Jazz's news!

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prowlerprime September 28 2010, 17:56:23 UTC
Thank you. :) yes, i was balling my eyes out during that scene when i wrote it. So tissues were a necessity. :D

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