Comments | proteinscollide: Reason (R, Fred/George, Fred/Harry)

proteinscollide

Reason (R, Fred/George, Fred/Harry)

Aug 28, 2004 18:35

I can't believe I made it before the deadline. Anyway, new HP fic, written for the A Family Affair fuh-q-fest.

( Reason. R. Fred/George, Fred/Harry. )

slash, hp, fic

Comments 13

althea5000 August 29 2004, 06:54:06 UTC

eeeeeep! that was fabulous!

proteinscollide August 29 2004, 12:32:45 UTC

Thank you! =) I'm glad you liked it.

(I love your icon...grinny Seth and Ryan, *sigh*.)

switchknife August 29 2004, 18:02:24 UTC

Harry's just--he--I--

*gibbers*

Just beautifully paced, as usual, but I must say that this version of Harry makes my day. Week. Fortnight. PLZ WRITE MORE HARRY LIKE THIS PLZ.

Loved the sense of harmony at the end, the joining of two halves, as opposed to the discordant lust of the Fred/Harry pairing. Full circle, and oh. Mmmmmm.

proteinscollide August 30 2004, 10:39:07 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. (Actually, I'm just glad to see you around again. Hi! I hope your RL gets better for you. *hug*)

Heh. I've been called on that Harry is quite OOC here, and I suppose he could be, but I rather like him too, the sneaky twisted boy he's become. Thank you for your lovely comments. =)

mlyn August 29 2004, 19:15:46 UTC

Boy, I gotta love the unusual choice of perspective. I also think it's great that the twins aren't carbon copies of one another, and that not everything is perfect in getting the shop off the ground. Nicely done.

proteinscollide August 30 2004, 10:41:35 UTC

Thank you. I love writing the twins, and somehow they're quite different, but so very close, the way I see them in my head. I'm glad that came across for you. =)

veryshortlist August 30 2004, 00:41:50 UTC

Love the unique perspective, and how much of a pair of bachelors the twins are. And Harry, oh Harry is so perfect here, it's scary.

proteinscollide August 30 2004, 10:42:51 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the story. And yeah, I just have this image in my head where the twins have to cook for themselves for the first time, and Fred's standing at the sink with a spatula in his hand, looking at George as if he could eat his twin instead, he's so hungry. For food, of course. =)

ummmm... detentionhall August 30 2004, 08:46:31 UTC

that was fan-fucking-tastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I've always been a twinsessed(i think thats how you spell it)person myself

Re: ummmm... proteinscollide August 30 2004, 10:43:32 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for leaving a comment. =)