Sense (G, Ron/Hermione)

[proteinscollide]

For anamchara, who asked for "Ron/Hermione, sweet first kiss, 6th year, on Hogwarts grounds".

also up at Skyehawke

Comments

[elynrae]

Oh, this is gorgeous - the different smells and the girls rolling their skirts up and just all the tiny details you always put in. I've missed your writing.

How soon is it going to be up somewhere public so I can rec it?

[proteinscollide]

Thank you. It always means a lot to me when you say you like it, because your writing is so lovely. I'm glad you like the details - I know I ramble a bit, but if it works for some, it's good. =)

I've put it up at Skyehawke, since anamchara is fine with me doing so: Sense

[giglet]

Thank you! Lovely and yes, sweet.

[proteinscollide]

Thank you! I'm glad that came through for you. =)

[kaleidoruby]

Oh, wow, I'm not a fan of Hermione/Ron (I'm a Harry/Hermione shipper through and through) but this story was wonderful. I love your writing, and it was just really, really sweet.

[proteinscollide]

Oh. One of those... *glares*

No, I'm joking. =) I mean, I'm not joking that I'm a bit of a rabid Ron/Hermione shipper, but it's nice to hear that I can sway someone to this pairing just for a little while. Thank you!

[anamchara]

Oh. Oh. Oh. This is utterly and fantastically lovely! It's perfect. All that I asked for and far, far more. I adore the way that Ron eases into this situation, as though he has not been building up to it for years. And I love the details. Hermione is just right, never deterring from what she does, and yet finally, that is enough for Ron to see. I love your use of subtlety and language that slowly reveals something far more.

I'm so happy to have gotten this written for me! Thank you so much. You write these characters as only the best fanfic authors can. You let them shine, and it shows here. It's absolutely beautiful. Thank you!

Also, I want you to post this somewhere (if you want). I mean, the loveliness of this ficlet deserves to be read.

:D

[proteinscollide]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it - as I said, it took me a little while to find a way of writing the pairing - and I really just wanted you to enjoy it. =)

I've put it up at Skyehawke too, you can find it here.

[sangredulce]

Yay! This is very sweet, and full of, I don't know, verisimilitude. I really enjoyed it.

[proteinscollide]

Thank you. =) That's a lovely word, and it's nice to know the story rings true.