Been meaning to do this for a while. Constructive crit please. I'd like to know what I'm doing right and what I need to work on, but be constructive about it. Anon commenting and screened comments are go. IP logging off.
Thank you so much! It's really nice to hear feedback. At times I'm kind of nervous with Lana because it seems sometimes like there's only so much you can do with her, but the Shalice thing actually was an idea I had for Lana. There's definitely a plot involved there and I'm kind of hoping more will come out of it later.
I really wish I had an Ema, but I'm trying to work with what I have, so if you see anything else I should work on with Lana, please let me know!
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I really wish I had an Ema, but I'm trying to work with what I have, so if you see anything else I should work on with Lana, please let me know!
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