Waaaah,I remember the whole button incident and I find it so cute that you wrote it here. And even if I hate Ryu's dad from the bottom of my heart,I always enjoy seeing him being the bad guy in fics. It always helps with the plot <3
Anyway...I feel really sad for Ryu and I surely didn't want Hayato to leave...but you've managed to make a great story out of all the events related to Gokusen :) It's fantastic.
Also, I was soooo furious at the scene with Ryu's hair. I was like "HANDS OFF THIS AWESOMENESS!" XDD
I made him especially bad for the sake of this fic *shameful* Well. I just wanted to explore the idea.
Hayato is such a sweet coward ♥ He should consult people before he escapes responsibility by acting a tragic hero. Pfff. Idiot.
I loved writing the part with Ryu's hair ♥ There was actually a 7 page original version of this fic before I decided that it absolutely must be expanded... and it ended up being around 50 pages *cough* The hair part was there too. It's maybe one of my favourite scenes for this fic, so I'm happy you liked it ♥
50 Pages...I'm just never gonna make it work xD 50 pages can work in a multi-chapter fic for me, but I'm never gonna manage 50 pages in sth like this xD
But I'm sure I loved reading the part with Ryu's hair as much as you loved writing it^^
I'm bad at multichapter formatting. You have to think of cliffhangers and everything... I just keep writing and writing and sometimes I realise to my horror that it's the length of some short novel... and it's supposed to be a oneshot... *guilty* Long fics don't really suit me, I get really pissed when writing them because I have to write constantly because I don't want it to be left unfinished but it takes so much time and energy and sdfghj I'm too lazy XD The quality usually drops towards the end.
On second thought, I'm not sorry about the running commentary so...
You skimmed over Gokusen 2 and then theres "He falls right back in love again" and the stolen kisses and the buttons and that part there on the couch where, again, I can almost almost feel what Ryu is going through.
And Ryu tells his father he will be a teacher and they're okay then he tells him he's gay and shit hits the fan but he still doesn't run away and goes along with the therapy and the arranged dates and ...I really don't know what to say about that except it's, yeah. You know. It happens like this.
He knows. He snorts a little and draws in a shaky breath. It’s about time this came up. He’s been waiting. He wonders if it’s going to hit him harder later or if it’s really this easy, just a sharp, ripping sensation somewhere inside of him. “I never thought so,” he assures Hayato. With that, the topic is over. -> THIS IS
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I didn't feel like writing parts that are already known... *lazy* So. Yes. I skipped XD
Writing this made me really feel bad for people who are under constant pressure from their family :< It was... kind of painful. Because I'm sure stuff like this goes on in real life somewhere. So. ...Mm. It's a bit sick.
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Anyway...I feel really sad for Ryu and I surely didn't want Hayato to leave...but you've managed to make a great story out of all the events related to Gokusen :) It's fantastic.
Also, I was soooo furious at the scene with Ryu's hair. I was like "HANDS OFF THIS AWESOMENESS!" XDD
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Hayato is such a sweet coward ♥ He should consult people before he escapes responsibility by acting a tragic hero. Pfff. Idiot.
I loved writing the part with Ryu's hair ♥ There was actually a 7 page original version of this fic before I decided that it absolutely must be expanded... and it ended up being around 50 pages *cough* The hair part was there too. It's maybe one of my favourite scenes for this fic, so I'm happy you liked it ♥
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But I'm sure I loved reading the part with Ryu's hair as much as you loved writing it^^
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You skimmed over Gokusen 2 and then theres "He falls right back in love again" and the stolen kisses and the buttons and that part there on the couch where, again, I can almost almost feel what Ryu is going through.
And Ryu tells his father he will be a teacher and they're okay then he tells him he's gay and shit hits the fan but he still doesn't run away and goes along with the therapy and the arranged dates and ...I really don't know what to say about that except it's, yeah. You know. It happens like this.
He knows. He snorts a little and draws in a shaky breath. It’s about time this came up. He’s been waiting. He wonders if it’s going to hit him harder later or if it’s really this easy, just a sharp, ripping sensation somewhere inside of him. “I never thought so,” he assures Hayato. With that, the topic is over. -> THIS IS
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Writing this made me really feel bad for people who are under constant pressure from their family :< It was... kind of painful. Because I'm sure stuff like this goes on in real life somewhere. So. ...Mm. It's a bit sick.
Please enjoy the last part too ♥
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