fic: Companion (My Feet Are Moving Forward)

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Title: Companion (My Feet Are Moving Forward)
Beta: pinkeuphoria1
Pairing: Jin/Kame
Rating: PG
Genre: General, Romance
Notes: For maiamcw. Thank you for helping me to get Test Drive ♥ It's a bit, uh, general and pointless but that happens at night with a writer's block :<
Word count: 1,400

Summary: Tokyo, Japan. 2.00AM, 4°C. Jin is back, even if it’s just for a small

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[wintersdancer]

TANTTU-FIC *cries in glee*

He was in love, once. A long time ago, here in the eastern land of Japan, Akanishi Jin fell in and out of love before he found his own feet.

I loved this sentence! Made me go all :O and ♥

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Oww, thank you ♥ I quite like the ending sentences myself for some reason ._____. I don't know. I guess inspiration hit me finally... when I was wrapping it up XDD

[wintersdancer]

It's all inspired but the last sentece is just so much everything ç_ç

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*hugs* Cutie pie, there's no need to bawl~

[maayacola]

This is about to break my heart and I haven't even started. I already know.

His phone buzzes - there’s a text from his mum, asking him how the flight went and inviting him home for lunch. There are some drunken texts from Pi too, eager, delighted and demanding. They make him smile. I love this. I love the idea that Jin has his Japanese life still, and asdfghjkl PIN LOVE so fierce.

Jin slouches after him, feeling awkwardly like he has the mental capacity of a puppy. Jin is SUCH the puppy, this is so good.

It doesn’t matter if he tries hard or not at all, Jin always finds them trapped in the same vicious circle. this hurts so good. yes, jus how i love my Akame. Hurting so good.

Kame’s breath is warm and it smells like cigarettes and fruity gum. ASDFGHJKL so lovely. you are lovely.

He was in love, once. A long time ago, here in the eastern land of Japan, Akanishi Jin fell in and out of love before he found his own feet. Now all that’s left is to walk.

One step at a time. WHAT IS THIS ENDING MY HEART IN THOUSANDS OF PIECES ON THE

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Ah, I'm so glad you liked it XD I was pretty nervous, I had to rewrite several parts many times before I was even remotely happy with them XD Uh. But your reaction is so lovely I guess it was worth it? :< ♥

It almost became Pin, except then it didn't XDD ♥♥♥ Maybe some other time. I still haven't written any Pin. Weird. I should write it sometime... XD

AND I CAN STILL SEND YOU A POSTCARD IF YOU WANT TO :<<<< Test Drive is so superb I can't express my gratitude to you ;;A; ♥

[maiamcw]

*_______* all the pin

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I take it you're a huge Pin fan ♥ XD

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I'm happy you liked it! :D

[pinkeuphoria1]

You evil little thing ♥ Keep writing forever~

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YOU evil little thing ♥ Keep beta'ing... I believe you still have, uh... two looong fics there? *patpat* XD Just don't overwork yourself, take time to chill ♥

[chained_akame]

"He was in love, once. A long time ago, here in the eastern land of Japan, Akanishi Jin fell in and out of love before he found his own feet. Now all that’s left is to walk."---> I don't know if I should like this or not, it has a bittersweet feeling that I really don't like,but still...it was really nice to read^^

And the rest is just lovely. I always love the way you portray Kame <3 Thanks for sharing^^

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Hmm, I don't know, I felt like taking this kind of standpoint to their relationship, because... well... reality isn't all happy and rainbows. Sometimes things don't work out, there's something that never quite goes away but... it just doesn't go the way it should, and eventually you adjust to it and it becomes alright. Or something like that :< A bit... sadder view.

Thank you for reading again~ I'm glad you liked it anyway!

[chained_akame]

I know. I'm not juding or anything^^ I truly loved the way it was written,it's just that it left a sour feeling that I don't like,but it can't be helped^^ Plus, a fic filled of happiness wouldn't necessarily be good :)

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I sometimes get this sudden urge to explain something XD Sorry, I didn't mean to sound offended or anything ♥ XD And all kinds of fics are nice... both angst and happy fics have their strengths and weaknesses, though :3 Difficult to compare them. Angsty fics stick in at least my head for a longer time, though... or, well, fics where there's a mix of both *o*