fic: Sync

Oct 06, 2011 23:26

Title: Sync
Author: prologuesized
Beta: pinkeuphoria1
Pairing: Jin/Kame
Rating: PG
Genre: AU, Angst, General
Notes: I was bored and I wanted to do something short. Yuppie. I don’t even know.
Word count: 1,000

Summary: Jin makes a doll. The doll has emotions.

They’re going to cut the electricity this week, they warned on a formal, polite yet entirely bitchy sheet of paper filled with instructions to pay the bill online. )

pairing: jin/kame, genre: general, rating: pg, genre: au, format: one-shot, genre: angst

Leave a comment

Comments 54

bellemainec October 9 2011, 16:39:05 UTC
Love love love this. Love the detail in the craft, love the skips through time, love the image of Kazuya being created carefully and slowly in a delicate balance of materials, love the image of Jin as creator, and the final line of Kazuya having found his harmony. Love the way it flows as well....just the right amount of detail to engage and pain the picture but not too little and make it sparse or too much to weigh it down. Gorgeous.

Reply

prologuesized October 9 2011, 16:43:15 UTC
Asdfghjkl such a lovely comment. Thank you ♥ :< I really appreciate it. I'm really glad you think of it that way. So... yes XD Thank you! This made me so happy ♥

Reply


elanielyn October 9 2011, 22:31:10 UTC
I don't usually like vague things, but this is sweet. I like the ideas of the fireworks inside him to keep him warm, and how Jin finds him beautiful even when he's already an old, dented doll.

Reply

prologuesized October 10 2011, 03:18:26 UTC
Owww :< I usually don't write this vague things but I didn't want to write anything long so this happened XD

Thank you for reading! *squishes* i'm glad you thought it was sweer!

Reply


starg8fan_liz October 10 2011, 01:26:51 UTC
lovely ^_^♥♥♥♥

Reply

prologuesized October 10 2011, 03:19:19 UTC
Thank you for reading! :D

Reply


amm_akame_love April 20 2016, 03:46:02 UTC
Oh my God, I love you, I seriously love you *_* your writing is amazing and omg Kame, this one is beautiful although it hurt like...I'm not sure, it was sad, but not a bad sadness? XD jajajajaja
Thanks for sharing!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up