fic: "I Like You" in a Sandy Fashion

[prologuesized]

Title: “I Like You” in a Sandy Fashion
Author: prologuesized
Beta: pinkeuphoria1
Pairing: HayaRyu
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Smut
Summary: Hayato’s gang hits Okinawa on a road trip. Amidst the overwhelming heat, their vehicle decides to take a vacation. Hayato’s attempt to help Ryu cool down a little ends up with quite the opposite outcome.
Author Note: I was bored and elanielyn threw

Comments

[prologuesized]

Spot for Ale because this wouldn't exist without her ♥

[elanielyn]

YAY SPOT FOR ALEEEE.
Ale likes this verry much. Specially how harsh they are because it's just so them, Ryu resisting and Hayato being a completely homophobic bastard who ends up fucking his best friend anyway.
THIS NEEDS A SEQUEL TANTTU. In which Ryu confesses properly and there's proper cuddly love making.

[prologuesized]

I'm kind enough to preserve you a spot ♥ NOW, LOVE ME :(

...I like how you summed Hayato up XDD I'm cracking up in here. Then again, it's so him. His front and actual actions are so bipolar.

Honestly, I DON'T THINK RYU WILL CONFESS XDDD If someone would bring it up, it would be Hayato because it'd bug him so much he can't get it off his head XDD But I dunno about the sequelllllllll :< It doesn't feel riiiiight. You can imagine the cuddly love making. I'll just work on my school essays ;;___________;

[elanielyn]

Not confess, but maybe grudgingly stop denying Hayato's claims of Ryu liking him which would be like a confession which would confuse Hayato because he suddenly realizes he maybe does like Ryu too and that maybe he was an homophobic bastard last time and should make it up to Ryu so he tries with chcolates and flowers which of course doesn't work because Ryu's a guy and a bitchy one at that so at the end he tries with cuddly love making.

[pinkeuphoria1]

I wanted to steal her first spot :(

[pinkeuphoria1]

Also, I demand a sequel

[prologuesized]

NO SEQUEL, it's an open-ended one-shot :((((( And you count as first who fought for the spot ♥ *squishes* My awesome beta ♥

[pinkeuphoria1]

But Hayato won't leave it at that!!! And he needs to make it up to Ryu and and and it just can't end like that!!!! Your awesome beta says so, listen to her ♥

Yay, first~

[chained_akame]

My God,this was incredibly amusing in every way possible. I mean it xD

The conversation before the whole sex scene was hilarious and I completely adore the Hayato you wrote xD He said so many phrases that made me laugh,I could quote the whole fic xD But HayaRyu sex in the water...that was indeed sth new and fresh and sooooo good :)

And wow,confession xD Hahaha,poor Take. You did well by ending it with this scene. It was fantastic :)

thanks for sharing this^^ now I really wish I was at the sea xDD

[prologuesized]

I'm glad you found it amusing XD I don't feel very skilled with humour, but, uh, even I can't control Hayato. He's hilarious to write! :D If he ends up talking about nipples all the time, then he just does and that's it. Quirky guy ♥

I got the idea and then I got curious about it. Normal beach sex is something that gets done pretty often so I felt like doing something a bit different for a change XD I'm glad it worked out in your opinion :3

Ryu will forgive Take ♥ Because they're special too and it was an accident :3 Their friendship is pretty goddamn strong in my eyes :< *squishes them* Ryu already gave up his friendship with everyone for Take's sake. That says something.

GO TO THE SEA. ...I hate the sea XD But it could also be because I hate bikinis and swimming suits. Do not want. Not on me. And salt water feels yucky. Sand sticks everywhere. Hrrr. ...I'm really not made for beaches XD

[chained_akame]

Well,Hayato is Hayato xD He can just sit there and I will already start laughing xD

Yeah,RyuTake friendship was sth I adored in the drama :)

And I'm not a big fan of the sea as well xD But the temperature here is really high,so I can't help but think of places with lots of water xDD

[prologuesized]

The poor guy's just got something funny about him XD Gotta agree ♥

Oww XDD I just got away from Spain ♥ The temperature's now 5-10 celcius degrees colder. Thank god XD

[wintersdancer]

fhsjkaddhasjhdasjk there are like hearts flying around my room right now ♥

I loved it ♥ (not that I was doubting this anyway xD)
And ♥ I love how everything between them is some sort of fight Hayato wtf? xD

And I want to squish Take xD He's in some serious troubles now xDDDD

[prologuesized]

...Hearts flying around your room? Wow, I'd like to see that. Mail me some. The image sounds fascinating. I think I'm in love. Like, real hearts *o* ...I'm insane.

Oww, I'm happy you liked it then ♥ Thank Ale for it XD And I can't stop those two from fighting .____. It's their way of hiding the super cute cuddly and adorable sweethearts they are *cough* It's a constant competition for power XD Sometimes I get annoyed with them...

Poor Take ♥ But Ryu will forgive him, yes. They're close and their friendship is golden :< ♥

Thank you for reading ♥ ...Sorry that my comment is 3x the original comment's length again asdfghjk I ramble too much.

[bellemelody]

Thank you very much for his great fic!!!!!!!! All your fics are so different and I really love the all!! This one not an exeption!!! I'm craving for Hayaryu and always when I find new fic with gem it makes me so happy!!!
I love your characterization of Hayato and I guess it really match with Hayato from drama)) because he s cocky and try to show his coolness, but in reality just like his, clumsy, stupid and adorable!!!!
I sooooo love it, dear!!! Ryu nipples XD XD XD this is epic!!! XD XD XD and so many moments and details I love!!!! That greAt!!!!!!!

[bellemelody]

And I want more Hayaryu!!!!!!!!

[prologuesized]

I love Hayato ♥ Such an inspiring character. He can annoy me to death, but I'd gladly let him because he's hilarious. I wish I could write more fics of him and maybe improve the plotlines a little too so that I could really bring him justice ♥

I'm really glad you read and enjoyed this! Thank you ♥ Enjoy thinking about tiny Ryu nipples! I bet no one else but Hayato bothers to tease him about them much because he's so passive about it... at least straight to his face XD

[bellemelody]

Please do it!!!! Write more Hayato, because the way you write him is priceless so alive, funny and just don't know how express his much I love him in this fic!!!! Again tell you how I enjoy reading his fic!!!! So will wait moooooore HayaRyu!!!!!!