fic: Orchids

[prologuesized]

Title: Orchids
Author: prologuesized 
Pairing: Hiroto/Ryu/Jin/Kame/Shuuji. Oh my god, what have I done.
Rating: NC-17
Genre: PWP, Humour
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the story.
Summary: When Kame and Jin get together again in 2007, Kame finds himself awkwardly faced with three of his very familiar replicas the man has managed to take in during their break-up. He

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[circuside]

SPOT. SJKDHFSJDF.

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HI.

[circuside]

OH MY GOD, WOMAN.

THAT WAS SO DISTURBING. AND SO HOT.

...THIS IS SO. SERIOUSLY. DO YOU EXPECT ME TO WRITE A COHERENT COMMENT NOW?

YOU'RE A PERVERT. AND I LOVE IT.

YOKOYAMA.

JIN SNIFFING THE BOXERS.

ALL THOSE KAMES MUSJGDHUYGFH.

ILUSM.

[prologuesized]

I AM DISTURBING 8(((((((((((((( I'M THE KING OF PERVERTS. READ MY PORNZ.

Yokoyama's... awesome XD It took me a while to realise who was there. I was like. "Tackey... no.... Tegoshi... no... Yokoyama............ DAMMIT" XDDDD OH WELL.

AND JIN TOTALLY SNIFFED THE BOXERS ON HIS OWN. HE WAS JUST AWFUL. POOR KAME. POOR POOR KAME. I WOULDN'T WANT ANYONE SNIFFING MY BOXERS IF I HAD JUST... Not that I have this problem...

THANKS FOR READING THE KAME ORGIES. IT WAS FUN FOR A CHANGE.

[imangelofmusic]

hooooooly kame! that was kinky!

[imangelofmusic]

Shuuji wraps his arms around Shuuji and wails, hips rocking a bit joltingly

good for shuuuji...

[prologuesized]

OOPS. I THINK MY MIND'S BEEN KINDA ELSEWHERE. WILL FIX XDDDDD

Thanks for reading!

[orangeteadrop]

OHMYGOD. MY MIND. IT HAS BEEN BLOWN x25488745415215346485748

This was just hot, hot HOT!

Enough said.

[prologuesized]

Kame tends to do that when he starts multiplying...

Thanks for reading XD

[pinkeuphoria1]

LOL LOL LOL OMG, putting aside the fact that it's NC-17 (I actually can), this is just..... Kame x4.... wow.... lol lol lol. And Jin... I think I'll be the only one going lol, because.... Kame+Ryu+Hiroto+Shuuji ...... Oh Jin, OH JIN XDDDDDD

I don't make sense, do I? XD

Though I think you missed a name here: 'When grips him jealously away from Hiroto’s hold and pushes Shuuji there to replace him, Kame finally realizes the seriousness of his actions.'

I REPEAT: OH JIN, WHAT DID YOU DO

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OOPS. YOU'RE RIGHT. I GUESS I NEED TO FIX THAT.

AND I KNOW, SO ABSURD I'M NOT SURE IF I CAN EVEN TAKE IT SERIOUSLY. OKAY, I CAN'T. ANYWAY. KAME'S SO SEXY HE'S A KAME-MAGNET. ...Or maybe Jin's just good at piling them up... He can sniff them from afar and their dirty underwear... *sigh* Pervert.

HI. THANKS FOR READING.

[pinkeuphoria1]

JIN AND HIS SNIFFING, OMG..... I WONDER IF I'M THE BIGGEST PERV HERE SINCE I'M LAUGHING.....

Though dfsvkj don't get me wrong, not laughing at the fic. It is fine.... it is.... uuu, 4 Kame's. I blame Jin for my reaction, really.... He'll spend half of his time locked in the bathroom and the other half, watching them.... interact. Oh my XDDDDDD

THERE NEEDS TO BE MORE KAMEXKAME

[prologuesized]

The fic is here to amuse me. Not a serious one - feel free to laugh. XDD Really.

AND WELL, JIN'S JUST PERVY LIKE THAT. I WONDER IF HE STEALS ALL OF THEIR UNDERWEAR AND FILMS SECRETLY HIROTO AND RYU. POOR LITTLE THINGS. SUCH VICTIMS THEY ARE. Thank god they've got each other~

I'm probably the biggest perv in here though, having written this... What do you mean sick and twisted? o:

[holly_berri]

*A* aksjfl omg i read the pairing line and died ...then i went and read the fic and died all over again >.>
this is so amazing i cant even-

KAME/KAME win ♥ oh, and jin. o.O that makes everything perfect ~
and i love the suggested ryu/hayato so much >.

[prologuesized]

Kame does this to people. And pervy Jin who really enjoys having his fun multiplied a little. XDD

Glad you liked it, thanks for reading ♥ And poor HayaRyu ;;_______; They'll make up sometime. They'd be miserable apart.