fic: Love's (1/2)

Feb 21, 2010 17:08



Complexity. That’s the word for the two of you.

Hatred too. From your part.

Tired and sick. Sounds about right.

Exhaustion.

…Idiocy. Pure idiocy. You aren’t an idiot, no. He is but you aren’t. But when it comes to the two of you there’s no way of denying it. You’re such an idiot.

You should stop playing already. Hasn’t there been ( Read more... )

pairing: jin/kame, rating: r, genre: romance, format: one-shot, genre: angst

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kuro_chin February 21 2010, 19:05:13 UTC
Leaving a short message so that I won't forget:

Hissy fit, not sissy fit, and
near the end, there's a "his" in the place of "he's". Or something. If I remember right.

Sorry for the unnecessarily short message, the last prhase had me crying, so I'll comment more after the next part...

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prologuesized February 21 2010, 19:59:38 UTC
OH, THANK YOU. I'll try to find and fix those XD This is what happens when you just write and don't proof read. I apologize XD

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