fic: Screenplay 12° (2/2)

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Jin sleeps naked.

In autumn when the weather starts turning cold and the heating in his apartment misbehaves he has two blankets over him when he drifts off to his dream world.

He wakes up to the beautiful purple of the sunrise, staring at the ceiling and feeling the slight brush of the sheets on his bare skin as he shifts, enjoying the

Comments

[rim1789]

I really liked it ^^ Oh...I will have to read back because I didn't understand the end...Was Jin charged for rape because Kame told them he raped him, or was it charged because Kame said he had a relationship with him and they did it and well since nobody believed him...

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Ah, it's because Kame sort of... set up a scenario which led everyone to assume so and started claiming that Jin had raped him, yes. :( ...And... well... since they had had sex... there actually was some evidence and all, so... Kame just played his cards. And it lead to Jin's downfall. He's too, but I don't think he really... acknowledges it properly. :<

Thanks for reading, glad you liked it! :D

[chained_akame]

Sorry but my comment will be awful since I'm really sleepy to leave a proper pne...*blushes*

I liked it.I really like the way you wrote them,I love how Jin believed Kame,even though in the end it didn't end up good. I love how manipulative Kame was and I seriously enjoyed reading their relationship moving to another level

Thanks for sharing this *hugs*

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I'm glad you liked it! :< And being sleepy is forgiven XD Thanks for commenting & reading!

[kawaiikame]

wow what a an amazing fic!

This fic of yours is just too beautiful and interesting for any words to describe!!

I had a feelings that Kame was lieing all the time but I just wanted to hope that he really did love Jin but he wasn't being believed because of his overly lies and sickness, but damn the last line broke my heart!

For Kame to told them that Jin raped him is just too much, poor Jin though he didn't even find out that Kame was lieing.

Really amazing fic!
I'm totally in love with it~!

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I'm glad you liked it! And I'm pretty confident that not only was Kame lying to others but he was lying to himself too :< So... I'm not really sure what's true either. But he couldn't stop and... well... poor Jin ;;----------; his naïvety got him in trouble again. Poor man.

Thanks for reading!

[endohmiyako]

so...Kame is really a liar? Why he do that to Jin? isk...isk
it looks complicated but nice to read...

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Mental illnesses are complicated. He did it because he really was ill... He couldn't help it. ;;------;

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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I doubt my skills reach publicing level XD Maybe one day. If I ever manage to make myself. I would like trying to write at least one book that gets published in my lifetime but... OH WELL, I'M AWFULLY LAZY~ :3

Glad you enjoyed it 8< ...Life is so unfair.