fic: Consolation Play (2/2)

[prologuesized]

He wakes Jin up with a gentle shake, enjoying the sight of his sweaty and dirty body under the dim and yellow light. He caresses Jin’s chest and brushes his dirty hair back soothingly as he helps Jin to down several glassfuls of water, knowing the other one must’ve been badly dehydrated by the point.

“I have a shake for you. It should have a

Comments

[kawaiikame]

wow that was quite dark .. but still something new from you to read, first seme kame and even crazy? thats too much lol.

But I feel sorry for Jin, such a bad luck he have to come across crazy kame.

Though seme Kame isn't my fav but still read this fic ^^

[prologuesized]

...Was it really my first seme!Kame? I think it wasn't... I'm quite sure I have some seme!Kame from before as well...

And thanks for reading 8< I think seme!Kame deserves more love.

[kawaiikame]

As far as I know, the fics I read from you before were all with seme Jin. Maybe I missed some of your fics?

Seme Kame isn't cute D:

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He isn't. Cute is ridiculous when he's seme. He's hot 8< That fits better.

And ha, now I'll have to check where my seme!Kame's are hiding...

Ha. Found.

Five Minutes & unprofessional have seme!Kame. And in Perfume Fusion and Butterfly he makes a decent try but for one reason or another ends up in the bottom when the moment comes... oh. Poor man.

But anyway XD Yes. I seem to have seme!Kame. ...He's just hiding in the pwps... oh damn. This is the first actual fic with a plot where he's seme... Now I feel bad for him XD

[death_note13]

Oh wow. This is amazing. Really, truly amazing.

I'm utterly speechless now. The ending, the ending is the best part.

♥ Poor Jin and Kame.

I think I'll be putting this into my memories to read later.

[prologuesized]

Aww, that's... nicely done ;;____; Although it was quite a messy piece and all...

Thanks a lot for reading! Glad you liked it!

[orangeteadrop]

Yeeees! Psycho!Kame is luuurve! Will be back with a decent comment after I finish getting over Psycho!Kame

[orangeteadrop]

Back! And with a decent comment this time LOL.

First of all, let me just say, YAY! You pushed on with the Psycho!Seme!Kame fic!

I just love the atmosphere of the whole story! It's just dark and and. Guh. I love it *A*

And Ryoda if you squint! Yay~ XDD

I started fearing for Jin's safety when they entered the bedroom. Seriously. Especially the part when Kame took out a string ball. I felt nervous all of a sudden haha.

“…You’re going to kill me,” Jin laughs hysterically and tries to twist away and avoid Kame’s touch.

Poor Jin...Although, the image of Jin totally scared as realization dawned on him and made him laugh and is in hysterics is somewhat vivid. For me anyway.

Everything has to be just right for Jin to stay after all. Jin’s world knew no imperfections.

I just LOVED this line *A* It somehow connects back to the line where Jin doesn't know how to be fearful and how Jin is a puppy amongst the crowd.

He has lost the sight of where the lies step in and where the reality stands.Such a heartbreaking line. I loved it. Tis my

[prologuesized]

I like it when people quote :< I get to see which parts went well. Or something.

And Jin really gets messed up in this... He's defense mechanisms kick in and end up turning against him. It's quite a sad sight. His personality is what rids him of his life in the end, his naïve and loving nature.

And who knows for how many people that had happened already... Hrr.

But you. Take tissues. :< Thanks for reading and commenting!

[kristen_erika]

_my god. O.O
kame is really sick here. so sick. so scary. so dark.
i was having goosebumps while reading this you know. especially at the last part. with the violin and all.
you are really a wonderful writer. so imaginative with your plots and storyline. so apt with your phrasing and word usage. amazing! beautifully done.

[prologuesized]

Aw, thanks a lot! ;;___; I think my plots aren't all that imaginative... it's hard to come up with something like that when you don't have a clear image what you're writing when you do it... I just go with the flow. That's why my fics often seem different when you compare the beginning and the end... damn XD

But thanks a lot 8< And the violin... well, seems I've listened to Emilie Autumn a bit too much again. Yup. That sound just got stuck in my head.

[kristen_erika]

_really? i didn't notice that. hmm. but if that's true, then i guess that's what makes it a lot better.

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Ah, I'm glad you think so! I'd like to be one of the people who can plan ahead their every move perfectly and all that but... I don't have the patience XD I get bored with it and can't write plus things just won't go as planned. It's just better to do it on impulse.

[circuside]

...I'm seriously scared to read this, because well I KNOW WHAT YOUR PSYCHO CAN BE, WOMAN. And on the other hand, I'm damn excited to read. ...So maybe I'll just read, uhm XD

[circuside]

...OH GOD, YOU, YOU, YOU--- ;;____;;; AKJSHDAKSJLDHASDHASDAIHFIEHFIUEHFIHA.

Dear god. I need to go calm myself down. .....

........Not working. DEAR GOD, WOMAN. HOW ARE YOU ABLE TO AJFDADFH I DON'T KNOW FUCK HELL I LOVE THIS I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT.

Seriously, oh my god. It's-- sick. It's really sick, it disgusts me, I love it.

It's wrong, it's so wrong.

I love them both in this. I love how you write them.

Kame is... seriously scary. And Jin is so naive. Poor Jin. Though somehow I feel sorry for Kame much more. I relate to him. So now you know what I will do to you when you come here next time--- ---ANYWAYS. Just. Just. I apologize, it seems that I really aren't able to write a proper comment B< YOUR FAULT. IT'S TOO AMAZING

[prologuesized]

...Take a chill pill.

AND I DID THE BOXER THINGY ON PURPOSE XDDDD YOU KNOW I DID.

And... and... damn, you go all crazy just because it's a bit psychotic. It's easy to please you, it seems XD I was actually quite hesitant with this, I haven't done psychotic in ages and it proved to be a bit difficult B< My skill seems to have suffered. Annoying. Too much fluff.

And thanks for liking the characterization or how-the-fuck-ever it's written. I often feel like I'm messing up... I just have to try to let them keep messing around how they want to B( Jin was almost too pussy in this but... WELL I'LL FORGIVE HIM BECAUSE HE CAN BE SUCH A WOMAN AND SQUEALING PUSSY SO YEAH. DOESN'T COUNT.

And I am so not coming to visit you again. Never, ever again. I'll end up strangled or something...

[circuside]

NO. B<

I KNOW. I KNOW AND DAMN IT XDDDDDDDD

And actually, it's quite hard to please me. I don't love something just because it's psychotic. BUT YOU, YOU JUST WRITE IT SO DAMN WELL YOU AJKDHJKSD B<

What, I'll just tie you to a chair. :3