ano... I think I spotted typos here and I need to tell .____."
After a while Pi rushed back with a cardboard box and pulled one of the many bottles from there, ripping the paper that had protected it off. “Smells like love for me,” Pi teased and nudged him... <== isn't it Ryo in those paragraphs above?
My smell isn't all too good ;;________; I don't really smell people. ...Which is also why I get creeped out when someone tells me they can smell me XDDD It's freaky.
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I think I spotted typos here and I need to tell .____."
After a while Pi rushed back with a cardboard box and pulled one of the many bottles from there, ripping the paper that had protected it off.
“Smells like love for me,” Pi teased and nudged him...
<== isn't it Ryo in those paragraphs above?
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Will fix it now :D
Thanks a lot!
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It sounds interesting!
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