Comments | profshallowness: DA vignette: Adoption Alec-Bag 'Em missing scene

profshallowness

DA vignette: Adoption Alec-Bag 'Em missing scene

Mar 04, 2006 12:20

Title: Adoption ( Read more... )

fanfiction, da genfic, tv, dark angel

Comments 6

henrika_amanda March 4 2006, 17:01:06 UTC

Nice little vignette. I could imagine this as a missing scene from Bag 'Em.

profshallowness March 5 2006, 14:35:41 UTC

Thank you! That's a lovely compliment.

scribblesinink March 5 2006, 17:19:51 UTC

I'm hoping to post a bunch of DA character-based ficlets in the recent future!

Oh, I only just now caught this comment, and wanted to say I'm looking forward to reading them.

profshallowness March 6 2006, 17:00:03 UTC

Thank you! Hoping to post them er, at some point...this week.

lusmeitli March 7 2006, 09:38:06 UTC

Very nice! How you caught how Alec is annoyed, that he should keep his mouth shut and that he would rather sleep in his car, but still, he gives his comments and joins them. The thoughts about his time on the outside world and the young'uns and then he lies down next to Bullet... protective behaviour. So Alec isn't that indifferent after all. You pointed that out wonderfully and you had him spot-on. And again with so few words! Loved it. Should be adapted and put on the DVD.

More ficlets? :) Always good to hear. You're a great writer. Thanks a lot for sharing this with us. *hugs*

profshallowness March 9 2006, 17:53:54 UTC

Thank you for this feedback! I just think Alec did and would have a better handle on how unprepared the kids were for the outside world than Max. I'm glad the characterisation worked, and that you felt that the scene would fit in with what happens on the show - I thought there was a missing scene feel there, because it's something of a jump cronologically between their changing the signal and the meet with Logan.

Thanks again, Lu!