Secret Santa Fic: Tryst (Frannie/Jack) 1/1 FRM/R

[velvetwhip]

Happy Holidays! This is my present for the amazing empty_marrow. It's my very first Frannie/Jack fic and I hope she likes it

Comments

[serialbathera]

Fantastic job :)

[velvetwhip]

Thank you! I enjoyed writing Frannie for the first time.

Gabrielle

[m_ravensblood]

Really loved it and I know that empty_marrow will adore it! Enjoyed seeing you trying the pairing and thought you did a great job. Particularly like the last two lines and thought they were an excellent ending :o)

[velvetwhip]

Thank you! I do hope she feels I did justice to Frannie. I did my level best. I am so pleased you liked it and thought the ending was strong.

Gabrielle

[empty_marrow]

Oh my god - you wrote me Frannie/Jack and it's amazing and I'm blown away! Thank you so much, this just strikes such a wonderful balance of bitter/bleak and hopeful for Frannie, and I love the glimpse into how and what they both think of themselves.

It's been a rough holiday due to some sudden family health issues, and it was great to escape to something this wonderful. Thanks again!!

[velvetwhip]

*hugs you* I am so sorry that your holiday has turned into a family crisis. I am holding all kinds of good thoughts for you and yours.

The fact that I wrote something that pleased you and took your mind off things for a few minutes makes me glad. Thank you for giving me the chance to stretch and try a new point of view!

Gabrielle

[kosmickway]

That was VERY interesting. I don't normally find the Jack/Frannie pairing compelling but you really made it so. Her voice is fantastic ... very attitudinous and in character. Excellent work!

[velvetwhip]

Thank you! It's so flattering that this made you see Jack/Frannie as an interesting pairing and that you feel I did justice to the troubled Ms. Malone!

Gabrielle