Secret Santa Ficlet for Kajivar

[velvetwhip]

This is a gift for the lovely kajivar. I do very much hope that you enjoy it.

Gabrielle

Title: Blonde on Blonde

Author: Gabrielle

Fandom: Profiler

Rating: FRM/R

Pairing: Jack/Sharon, Jack/Sam

Word Count: 622

Summary: He made a mistake, thinking he could mold anything worthy out of clay.

Feedback: Please

Distribution: skewedbelievers, profiler_fans, my LJ, and my site

Comments

[m_ravensblood]

This fic makes me want to squee! I love how effortlessly you made it flow. Your Jack voice was really top notch!

What a lovely gift for Kajivar :o)

[velvetwhip]

Thank you! I am so glad you feel I caught Jack's voice! That's so important to me!

I sure hope she likes it!

Gabrielle

[serialbathera]

This is such a great fic :) Great Jack characterization

[velvetwhip]

Thank you very, very much!!!!

Gabrielle

[empty_marrow]

Your Jack is deliciously creepy and messed-up! You did an awesome job on the flow of his thoughts and it feels very true to the character. Wonderful job!

[velvetwhip]

Thank you! It's been awhile since I've written Profiler and I am so pleased you feel I got it right!!!

Gabrielle

[kajivar]

First, my apologies for not commenting on this sooner -- I was away for the holidays meeting my 6th month old nephew for the first time, and when I got back I was thrown right back in the middle of Valentine's Day planning at work. I am soooo behind on LJ right now. And on posting my own Secret Santa, sigh. >.<

Anyway! :) Love it! I loved how you captured Jack's voice and how deliciously creepy it was. Thank you!

[velvetwhip]

I understand being busy. Congratulations on being an aunt!

I'm so glad you like your prezzie! I really wanted it to be something you'd enjoy!

Gabrielle