Secret Santa Gift for Serialbathera

Dec 23, 2008 23:30

Title: Recitative
Author: Raphaella
Rating: PG
Pairing: Jack/Janet Malone
Summary: Jack pursues a pawn for his game.
Author's Notes: This is for serialbathera who requested a pairing, "The crazier the better." So I tried this unlikely duo. Thank you for such an interested prompt. I hope you will like :-)

Very special thanks to m_ravensblood for translating this into ( Read more... )

secret santa 2008, fanfic, roman_romantic, jack/janet

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velvetwhip December 25 2008, 01:57:14 UTC
So devious, that Jack! This is nifty!

Gabrielle

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roman_romantic December 26 2008, 13:43:59 UTC
Thank you most kindly! I had a hard time coming up with a pairing that was truly off the wall. I resorted to brainstorming over the phone with Meg listing obscure characters and comparing them to main characters. This was one of the most out there, so I hope Amanda likes it :-)

Jack has a very one track mind and I suspect that he uses people without thinking twice. Not with hurtful intent for them so much as advancing his cause with Sam. I think many people are just collateral damage for him.

Thank you for commenting. Even though I got to write in my native language and have it translated, I have never written fanfic before.

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velvetwhip December 26 2008, 16:50:24 UTC
Wow! This is really an excellent first effort! Brava!

Gabrielle

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m_ravensblood December 26 2008, 16:55:30 UTC
I think it turned out excellently! Even Moochie thought so :o)

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serialbathera January 1 2009, 04:49:36 UTC
this is excellent, thank you for the beautifully written fic. I am glad you enjoyed the prompt and had fun with it

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empty_marrow January 2 2009, 01:25:07 UTC
This was beautifully written and a very original plot - I quite like the idea of Jack/Janet, even if we all know the poor thing is destined to play second fiddle to Samantha for all of the men around her. Well done!

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melanie_anne January 8 2009, 14:15:32 UTC
Ooh, very nice! Sneaky Jack ... :)

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