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Profiler-- Come Undone

May 26, 2008 18:47

Profiler- Come Undone

Rating: PG-13 for mentions of sex, violence, and drugs.

Pairing: VCTF friendship.

A/N: Takes place Season 4 when the whole entire team is in a tailspin. Takes place during the episode "Mea Culpa."

Summary: John reflects on the state of the VCTF as everything seems to be falling apart.

( Can’t ever keep from falling apart at the seams )

john, fanfic, kosmickway

Comments 5

serialbathera May 27 2008, 18:37:38 UTC

What an excellent written piece. :)

kosmickway May 28 2008, 01:58:04 UTC

thanks! I appreciate it!

m_ravensblood May 27 2008, 21:07:33 UTC

It's nice to see a piece that's focused on John! To me, for all the flaws of the fourth season it was when John was at his best because he grew so much as a person. Interesting seeing John's mistrust of the Senator - Bailey did seem pretty blind about her. Keep writing and exploring your boundries, you do some excellent John work :o)

kosmickway May 28 2008, 01:57:51 UTC

The thing that bothers me about Bailey in season 4 is that his IQ drops SO much. I mean, come on! We take him from constantly fretting about Sam to constantly fretting about Rachel! Oy!

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kosmickway May 28 2008, 01:56:44 UTC

Yay! It really is a decent season, if only because you see a lot of character interaction. Granted, the whole Joel Markes storyline SUCKED but in terms of character (especially for George and Grace), you get a lot of new information.

So glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for your kind comments.